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Alcreator Litt Dear
 
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Poet imagines and tells love is love and it is never confined to man only, love on a high fly is equal, it is unconditional; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Keep Writing, Inspiring, Changing


 Comment Written 07-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
    Thank you very much.
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James Orton
 
 
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What a lovely uplifting and positive poem. Filled with emotion and love how it finishes with a question or hope so the high can be experienced again . Well done


 Comment Written 07-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
    Thank you very much.
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Henry King
 
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I enjoyed reading this excellent love poem. The soaring, sweeping and diving over the waves were exhilarating descriptions of that romantic vision. The "me" in the second line of the third tercet sounded out of place. I would have preferred an "I". Then there was the abrupt third person "he" in the final verse. What happened to the second person "you"?

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 Comment Written 07-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
    Thank you for this very sincere review and for the suggestion .I had made corrections as your suggestions .i am sorry i am late in thanking you .
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CrystieCookie999
 
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I like the line "Surging waves hugged the sea" because it helps establish a framework that this is going to turn into a love poem. It sounds like the speaker is flying much like a seagull. I think this poem has an interesting sense of movement all over the oceanside. With the line: Smiling I told them how you and me
On summery winds, soared so high
I think I would write:
Smiling, I told them how you and I
on summery winds soared so high.
Then you get proper grammar for those two lines AND an end rhyme!

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 Comment Written 07-Aug-2019


reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
    Thank you very much and for the suggestion . I had made the correction .i am sorry i am late in thanking you .

reply by CrystieCookie999 on 13-Aug-2019
    No problem!
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