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Crush on Teacher


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  11 total reviews 
Comment by
Sally Law
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You know I love as good Limerick and this one is a triple treat, Mark. Sorry I missed this earlier. {Double sigh.} Your wonderful sense of humor shines here.
Enjoy your six stars.
Sally xo


 Comment Written 18-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 19-Nov-2019
    Thanks so much for going back to find this one, and for the generous rating - much appreciated.

reply by Sally Law on 19-Nov-2019
    You are welcome. This was a scream. I need a a good belly laugh right now more than I can say. S :)
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LOL
A terrific entry and some unique rhymers.
I love a good limerick and would have enjoyed entering this one. Not to worry. You've done the hard work. You deserve your moment of glory. For whilst you may have had to settle for a minor place in the contest, you got the girl, remember? haha
No contest there. Well done. In the bag.

P


 Comment Written 17-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 17-Aug-2019
    Thank you kindly, cpj - I, too am a fan of a good limerick.
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Congrats on THIRD!! This was a great offering for the contest, Mark! Love that you used Michele (Bad Teacher) to accent this one! :) :) Thanx for joining in the school-time fun!! ;) Take care and have a good week! ;) Yvette


 Comment Written 13-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 14-Aug-2019
    Thanks - l can't resist a good limerick contest. Glad you enjoyed them.
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This limerick suite, Crush On Teacher, has the general format correct displayed in three stanzas and proves that the right philosophy can lead to the right outcome. Nice.


 Comment Written 12-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 12-Aug-2019
    "the right philosophy can lead to the right outcome" - I hate it when the reviews are more clever than the limerick (just kidding - thanks for the review and the smile)
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Linda Engel
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You clever dog.. Take the the class till you get the babe. Ain't love grand. This was cute, clever, and inspiring. I had a crush on my English professor in college. It was fun while it lasted. Thanks for bringing back memories. Take care. This was a fun read.


 Comment Written 10-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 14-Aug-2019
    I had a crush on my Spanish teacher in high school - actually all the boys did. Perhaps I'll write a limerick in Spanish about her some day.
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Well, I have to give you kudos for working Nietzsche (spelling optional) and 'ubermensche' into a series of classroom limericks.
Funny, I was going to try this contest using Kierkegaard.
Great minds.

Best of luck.

Peace, Lee


 Comment Written 09-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 14-Aug-2019
    Thanks, Lee. This one didn't win but I'll take solace in the fact that I may have been the first to rhyme "ubermensch-y" in a limerick
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Pam (respa)
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-Nice image and presentation.
-Your note is appreciated.
-I like how you approached
this by using slang and
the class you flunked.
-At least you took it!
-The progression of what
happens each time is very good.
-You must have really liked
the teacher, at least
according to the last line!
-Good luck in the contest;
this is a creative entry.


 Comment Written 09-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 14-Aug-2019
    Thanks, Pam. While this was fiction, I certainly did have a crush on a teacher or two in my younger days.

reply by Pam (respa) on 14-Aug-2019
    You are very welcome, Mark.
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Darlene Franklin
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A clever poem, wi th the narrator getting the prize he wanted most. (I assume "he" because the picture is of a woman, but either gender.) Anyone who waxed "ubermenschy" probably could have passed but flunked on purpose to take it again. Ah, the path truth love sometimes takes!


 Comment Written 09-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 14-Aug-2019
    Thanks, Darlene. This one didn't win but I'll take solace in the fact that I may have been the first to rhyme "ubermensch-y" in a limerick
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Alcreator Litt Dear
 
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You joined intro class, of no result, you changed to next semester, you failed, and you tried third time to change 'F' but passed wedding the teacher; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Keep Writing, Inspiring, Changing


 Comment Written 09-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 14-Aug-2019
    Thanks - limericks are one of my favorite forms to write.
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Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written Trio Limerick about the crash on the teacher that doesn't get you the degree in the subject but you sure reached the goal to wed the teacher.


"Into(Intro) to Nietsche'

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 Comment Written 09-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 09-Aug-2019
    Yikes - thanks so much for catching that typo (it's always nice when one of the first reviewers catches mistake.
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