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Brothers fishing

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DonandVicki
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I really enjoyed your flash fiction and your words conjured up such colorful images...but as a person who isn't familiar with the lingo I was some what puzzled but some of the nomenclature.


 Comment Written 20-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
    G'day folks, Thanks for reading and I did put some author's notes to help with our lingo. In Oz we have 10,000 aboriginal dialects. My writing is simple compared with the whole kit and caboodle! Bless you friends. XXK.

reply by DonandVicki on 21-Aug-2019
    Thank you.
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I love this, K. Your flash fiction into the family Gundaroo are entertaining and contain much wisdom with your clear approach.

Best of luck to you with the Contest Committee. :))

Gloria


 Comment Written 16-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 17-Aug-2019
    Hello my friend, Thanks so very much for reading and glad you enjoyed. Also thanks for the luck wishes. Your nutty friend, Kace XX
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This is an excellent entry for the Flash Fiction contest.
I like that it makes me feel I too am on the banks of this river watching the boys bring in the barramundi for their grandmother's approval. It also shows the love a grandmother has for her grandsons and their adventurous nature. A worthy six shower. ~DD


 Comment Written 16-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 17-Aug-2019
    Hello DD, Thanks so much for your kind comments my friend. Glad you enjoyed my poem. Love, Kace.
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Hi Kace, how are you today my wonderful sweet friend...
I love your story told sweetie pie...these people are so grateful for having just that fish to eat...we take so much for granted...so very well written chick A dee...your picture made me smile...how exciting to catch a fish that big...love much you...Linda xxoo



 Comment Written 15-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
    Hello my little Sandwich, Ha Ha. Hey, I don't have a photo of you?
    I'm fine, all good here. Thanks so much for reading, I have another posted called First Nation. Love you much, Kace XXXX

reply by l.raven on 20-Aug-2019
    your always so welcome angel...and don't feel bad...my daughter just told me not long ago...when you die no one will have a picture of you...LOL...I will be back to review again soon...trying to help my daughter do her Ebay stuff...and I'm heading home next week...love you much too...xxoo
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It is a cute story .i loved the pride in the children for their achievement especially the younger one who said he helped to pull it in .all the best for the contest.


 Comment Written 13-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
    Thank you Sanku. Glad you liked the little story. Blessings, Kace.
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Thanks for giving us a glimpse of life in the outback.
I love hearing all those unusual words from Australia.
The language is as unusual as the species that roam the continent. Always a treat. Good luck Kayce. Nancy:)


 Comment Written 12-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
    Hello Nancy, Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed. Love, Kace XX
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Hello Kace, this may be fiction but it sounds like fact. Your use of all the language is impressive. You write a simple story with skill and make it sound really interesting. Very well written - Good Luck - love Dorothy x


 Comment Written 12-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
    Hello Dorothy, Thanks for reading. Based on fact. My grandmother was aboriginal. I wanted to write more, alas, 150 words stopped me. I have 17 chapters written on the Aboriginal Dreamtime (if you are interested.) Love, Kay.
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The story is beautifully written and very engaging. Your use of imagery to convey emotion and tone is well executed and a genuine accomplishment since that is so hard to do within word count restrictions. I ran this through three separate word checks, as well as counting manually in order to be sure and I get 146 words and not the required 150. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.


 Comment Written 12-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
    Thank you my friend, for taking the word count three times. I did write it on a word count program, still, I have added four words; taking your word for it! Many thanks for picking it up. Love, Kace.

reply by Mystic Angel 7777 on 13-Aug-2019
    I just checked it again and it is EXACTLY 150 words. I wanted to be sure so as not to let you down, my friend.

reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
    I so appreciate your help with this; now stop counting! You would think a word processor would get it right?
    Have a great evening? Love, Kace XX
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This is a great contest entry, Aussie. It reads smoothly with great details of another culture. the picture is a perfect pairing with your well-chosen words. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan


 Comment Written 12-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
    Hi Jan, Thank you for reading, glad you enjoyed. I have written 17 chapters on the Aboriginal Dreamtime. My grandmother was aboriginal. Love, Kace.
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This is a lovely story that allows us a quick glance into the lives of the Gundaroo. The truth is it's the first time I hear of this tribe.
In the last line, didn't you mean from instead of for?
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 12-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 13-Aug-2019
    Bless you Maria, Glad you like reading about our culture. Australian English is different to American, I will look at it again. Love, Kace.
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