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2019 part 4


Viewing comments for Prologue "Too Soon We Forget"

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Oh, wouldn't it though? This is a clever little poem, of course, although I don't think a lot of people would want to remember a lot of their past mistakes. Especially the big ones (the ones MOST important to remember). LOL.


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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
    Absolutely right, and I thank you so much

reply by Ideasaregems-Dawn on 16-Aug-2019
    You're very welcome,my friend. XX
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Mary Wakeford
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Hi Barb, love the (sideview) mirror to reflect what is left behind, and focus on what's ahead. We can't change the past, but we can definitely alter the future with positive energy and a defined plan.


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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019
    Absolutely right and thank you for understanding the use of the mirror
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I like the artwork you choose for your poem it tells it all.
Sometimes looking back hurt more than when it began yet we must take the bitter with the sweet and pray we learned from our mistakes.
Thank you for sharing
cookie


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    Absolutely right and thank you for understanding the use of the mirror

reply by misscookie on 17-Aug-2019
    Your welcome I see things many people don't I guess I get into it more than others some time..
    Take care.
    Cookie
    Cookie
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A real good reminder Barb Hensongispsaca that
it's best be smart
and remembering our past mistakes
carves and changes our future.

Gert


 Comment Written 14-Aug-2019



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    Absolutely right and thank you so much

reply by Gert sherwood on 17-Aug-2019
    You are welcome Barb Hensongispsaca
    Smiles to you.
    Gert
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Grandpa always said we learn from our mistakes. He said it make one a better perso. We also learn something new each day as time goes by.


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    Absolutely and thank you
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Yes, but instead of carving out, in some ways we're digging in deeper. Man ( that's generic man!) thinks he's SO smart Thanks for sharing
Hugs, Trisha


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    I love your profile picture.
    Absolutely and thank you
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Another fine haiku, Barb--and yet we're led by a man who doesn't read or study from history, and is leading us down the same path that ended in disaster before; but have a nice day!


 Comment Written 14-Aug-2019



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    Oh yes and thank you
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This is a well constructed 5-7-5 with correct syllable count. The content speaks to a theme that will resonate with many as we all would like to learn from past mistakes - but often don't. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.


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    Absolutely right andthank you so much
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I thought of kiwigirl's poem as soon as I read yours. I was thinking, great minds think alike! (Miss Cookie and I have found ourselves writing on similar themes on more than one occasion). Yours has the advantage of brevity, and I love the use of the word "carved."


 Comment Written 14-Aug-2019



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    I am honored and I thank you so very much for making my day

reply by Darlene Franklin on 14-Aug-2019
    I don't see my reply - so if this is repetitive, forgive me: You made my day with your comment, top 10 poet!
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