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The Day I Made The Wrong Turn


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  3 total reviews 
Comment by
Darlene Franklin
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You've discovered a difficult skill, of expressing your pain in a way others can relate to. If you wanted to expand, you could write this as a first person essay. But this definitely works in poetic forms. I love t he irony of taking the wrong turn to get back on t he right path. Thanks for sharing your story.


 Comment Written 15-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
    Thank you for your kindness and great review. God Bless
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Iza Deleanu
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Sometimes God sent us in a different path for a reason. As a human, we think we need lots of things to be happy, and we drive ourselves over the cliff in the name of temporary happiness. Only God is the one who carries us on top of all the thorns and injustice. Don't lose hope and keep writing


 Comment Written 15-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
    No My writing is my healing. I don't have hope anymore,
    I have Christ now with me. Thank you God Blessing.
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Alcreator Litt Dear
 
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Your wrong turn that you made that day brought you in the state of happiness; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write to Inspire, Change.


 Comment Written 15-Aug-2019



reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
    thank you my dear. Have a great day. God Bless.
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