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Couch Potatoes #7: The Obese Dog

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You've given very useful and interesting information in this script. I'm sure dog owners would be keen to learn about how to help obese dogs and those with diabetes. I didn't find anything that needed editing.


 Comment Written 27-Aug-2019



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    Glad you enjoyed this script. Much appreciate the review.
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I like the information you are giving us about dog health here. I think your dialogue seems like Zack is leading the vet to tell us more but perhaps that works in this interviewing situation. It wouldn't be natural conversation.
Could you also increase the font size as it's very hard to read this size, for me, at least.


 Comment Written 26-Aug-2019



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    Much appreciate the review. Glad you enjoyed this script.
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Another great post for the couch potatoes fans. Monitoring weight is interesting. We have eight dogs, all the same breed and all related. They are fed the same amount of food each per day. Three are a bit plump, three are a bit thin and two are about right. Since 7 of them get the same exercise the difference seems likely to be metabolic.
Yes, there is Zack,
Yes, Zack, there are,


 Comment Written 25-Aug-2019



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    Metabolism could play a part. Much appreciate the review.
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The photo looks like my new puppy, a cockapoo. Well dialogued script writing here, as well as providing a knowlege base for any interested pet owner. I do believe out of love, we are poisoning the very animals in our care, and I am as guilty as the next. Excellent information.


 Comment Written 25-Aug-2019



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    Much appreciate the review.
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You did well with this. Never thought of Dogs being Diabetic. How do they get the blood sugar levels? Can't prick the paws I guess? Hope I have a six for you. Check out some recent re-releases of my stuff. I still haven't done anything in that new place where you are.


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    Much appreciated review.
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Great presention for this and it is very informative for everyone to read and take note for helping ones pets to keep them happy and healthy.


 Comment Written 25-Aug-2019



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    Glad you enjoyed this script. Much appreciate the review.
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You did a nice job on this script. I certainly learned a lot about dogs and diabetes. I don't have a dog, but my friend's dog is really obese. I will share this info. Nice job.


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    Glad you enjoyed this script. Much appreciate the review.
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That was really interesting. My son has a lurcher, and I'm afraid when we look after him, we tend to 'spoil' him. He knows where we keep his treats when he stays! lol. But, he does get at least three walks a day. I'll be a bit more careful when he wants treats in future! Well done. :)) Sandra xx


 Comment Written 25-Aug-2019



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    Glad you enjoyed this script. Much appreciate the review.
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You chose a good picture to supplement your work. When I was small my parents gave away our city-dwelling dog to relatives who lived in the country thinking it would be best for him. Boy, did that dog get fat after the move. This piece was informational as well as entertaining


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    Glad you enjoyed this script. Much appreciate the review.
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