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Run, Duck, Crawl or Hide?

Run, duck, crawl or hide in a mass shooting?

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poetsteve15

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No truer words have been written here let about the fear of gun fire.
you are right we do not need mitartly asssat guns, rifes they are not covered under 2nd amenment no matter what they say.

Comment Written 04-May-2020

reply by the author on 11-Jul-2020

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I like the fact that you used the color yellow as the background color of the poem which in some cases means caution! Very creative way to use your color scheme! God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!

Comment Written 11-Jan-2020

reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020

Thank you. Such beautiful words. liberty

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Hey Justice, this is a pretty good warning poem that could be more than a poem in this day and age; with all the senseless shooting going
on, as you mentioned.
Parson

Comment Written 08-Dec-2019

reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021

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Wow I do think you included all we can ever think of in time of dire stress. What do we do in a time of pure evil hitting when we least expect? Do we have time to think? It seems it can happen anywhere nowdays. Nice message

Comment Written 17-Nov-2019

reply by the author on 14-Mar-2021

So true. Thanks.

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Excellent writing overall! what you have so poetically expressed is a sad
all too true scenario recurring all too often. Thanks for the valid advice.
Heard the news of another mass shooting today with an assault rifle also in Texas, two killed many wounded.

Comment Written 27-Oct-2019

reply by the author on 03-Nov-2019

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It's true I think that people - that all of us should be vigilant about what's going on around us. Not be complacent. I think of the school kids - some schools now have plans in place. I think all of them should have armed guards.
good poem to make us think.

Comment Written 24-Sep-2019

reply by the author on 25-Sep-2019

Thank you so much!

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When there is a gunman about wildly shooting, then this is the best course of action and the rest is in the lap of the Gods. A poignant write, love Dolly x

Comment Written 24-Sep-2019

reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019

Thanks so very much.

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Even before reading your notes it was clear what your poem was about. Senseless tragedy is becoming more common. This is a respectable entry for the rhyming poem contest. In addition to the picture, the red background sets the atmosphere of violence. This was a disturbing poem, but it needed to be said.

Comment Written 23-Sep-2019

reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019

Thanks for compassionate review lovely stars.

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What a very realistic poem. Unfortunately so true. A quick trip to town could very well cost you your life. I just wish someone could figure out why it's so widespread and how to keep this from happening again. Your poem is very well-written, interesting. It has a nice even flow and rhymes well.

Comment Written 23-Sep-2019

reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019

Thank you! You are so sweet. Lovely review and stars. A high school student sitting around in his car was shot and killed by two gunman last night.

reply by Mistydawn on 23-Sep-2019

It's not safe anywhere anymore.

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It's a sad world when we need poems like this but it contains sage advice given in an arresting manner. The refrain sticks in the mind and who knows? It might save a life one day.

Comment Written 23-Sep-2019

reply by the author on 23-Sep-2019

Thank you! You are so sweet. Lovely review and stars.

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