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The Little Boy Who Became a Star


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What a lovely story, Sanku, no wonder you won that contest. It's lovely learning about mythology in other countries. This was really nice. I'm glad the jealous queen was also contrite afterwards. Well done and congratulations. :) Sandra xx


 Comment Written 21-Oct-2020



reply by the author on 01-Nov-2020
    Thank you very very much for taking the trouble to read this little story of mine .i am touched that you selected a story to read .Thanks once again.
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Well written, good pace, not to fast or to slow. Good choice of story, I felt like I was in a large comfortable room listening to the story with a group of people.

Bar Ponneck


 Comment Written 22-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
    Thank you very much and I am sorry for the delay .I was not keeping good health
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A lovely retelling. I'll have to wait until after the voting is over to say more, lest I reveal myself during the contest. Thanks for the research and sharing . Good luck!


 Comment Written 14-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
    Thank you very much.
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I think your story is well told and entertaining.
It is well written, easy to follow, and has good structure.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Sharon


 Comment Written 14-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
    Thank you very much.sorry for the delayed reply.
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I loved this informative and mystical and magical write filled with legends of old and an explanation for the mythology here, much enjoyed and I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 10-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
    Thank you .I am sorry for the delayed reply .was quite sick.
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Good job and an interesting take on the challenge. It seems a lot of mythology revolves around family jealousy, but that's not surprising, since it exists in families everywhere. :)


 Comment Written 09-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
    Thank you very much and I am sorry for the delay in my reply .I was quite unwell.
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Dhruv became the king, blessed by seven sages, Lord Vishnu, ruled his father's kingdom, his step mother and step brother could not shine, the little boy of Hindu Mythology, Dhruv became a Pole Star; well said, well done.


 Comment Written 08-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
    Thank you very much.sorry for the delayed reply.
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Hello unknown author
First time I read the story of Polaris or Polestar according to the Hindu mythology. I found it well written into a short story for the contest.
Best to you.
Gert


 Comment Written 08-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
    Thank you very much and I am sorry for this late reply.I was sick and was not coming here at all.i had forgotten about the contest too. Today I saw that I have won!

reply by Gert sherwood on 17-Oct-2019
    Hello Sanku You are welcome.

    I hope what you said is not so
    (was not coming here at all
    . Please stay with us on Fanstory.
    Gert
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I guess the injustice was not all that important after all if Dhruv forgot about it. And I can imagine the king would have been very angry with his second wife for driving his son off. In your second paragraph did you mean quiet instead of quite?


 Comment Written 08-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
    Thank you very much .I am sorry for the delay .I was unwell and was not coming to the site.
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This is a very interesting story about the myth of the Polaris star. The Hindu have so many beautiful myths about many things in nature. If I might suggest, look this over a bit as there are a few edits you could do. One place has the sentence begin with no space after the period and another with an extra space before a comma. Hope this will help. Good luck in your contest! xoxo


 Comment Written 08-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
    Thank you very much for the suggestions and the detailed comments. I am sorry my reply was late .I was quite unwell.

reply by Diana L Crawford on 17-Oct-2019
    I'm sorry to hear that. I will keep a special prayer for you and never any worry on late response. you just worry about caring for yourself xoxoxo
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