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The Devils Power is Gone


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Miss Cookie, This is a very well written and good poem of testimony you have penned. Our life is supposed to be for others to see and learn too I believe. Thank you for posting this my friend. I hope you are doing better. You are in my prayers. May God bless you and your family always! love, Teri


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I've been away from FanStory for quite a while and have missed reviewing your poetry. It was a pleasure to read your interesting words. if my thinking is correct, your apt writing decribed many of the lives of people you love and know and the tests and trials faced by many. wonderful how understanding and compassionate you are. this is a fine poem. Hugs from your old friend, Aggie


 Comment Written 16-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 19-Jan-2020
    Your very welcome, i have been in the hospital for four month came home Jan 7, I don't know what to do about fan story had a stroke i'll be writing again soon i pray having problems with my eyes , with my right i I see everything in weird colors
    and and the floor in spots my vision is very blurry.
    Stay on praying grounds-must make appoint with doctor when I'm-able too,
    Cookie

reply by whizpurr ^-^ on 29-Jan-2020
    Thank you for your kind letter which has gone unanswered too long.So sorry to hear of your health set back. I hope by now you are if full recovery mode. It is so good you were able to express yourself so fluently through writing your beautiful poetry while you were able to do so. I, too, have been away from FS again for a while and rarely feeling the inspiration poetry requires for bringing it out of one's heart. My muse has been away on vacation! However, I felt it drawing near again recently. Smile. My thoughts, love, and prayers are with you my dear friend. Love and hugs, Aggie
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Hi Cookie. This is a well rhymed poem on turning things around. There are a few typos throughout. I think here you meant to say "remorse."
"For the first time I feel re-most" (remorse?)
Marilyn


 Comment Written 11-Sep-2019


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This poured from your heart and soul, clearly full of pain and yet hope for salvation for all who have been there. The rawness of the grammar only adds to the reality of the environment in which this flourishes. There is a quote from someone (forgive me I don't recall who)--"When you reach rock bottom-I've got good news. When you get down to nothing you got nothing to lose." True! And your most powerful message is no matter how desperate, drug induced, ragged a soul is--God is there, waiting for you to look up and see Him.--Karenina


 Comment Written 10-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
    I'm please you understood the poem.Have A blessed day.
    Cookie

reply by karenina on 11-Sep-2019
    You too...Karenina
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Cookie,

Wow. This is very cool. Some people look at those of us who are a little older and seem to have our act together and say, you don't get it, life is hard, there are so many temptations. But we say, oh, yeah, we know. We've been there, we've done that. We were not perfect. (At least I wasn't.) That's how we learn.

Nice message. Thanks, pal!

BTW, I wrote a piece on racial prejudice and I'd love your take on it? It's my most recent post. I definitely do not want to offend anyone. If you get a minute and want to stop by, I'd appreciate it. Hugs--


 Comment Written 10-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 11-Sep-2019
    How do I get to read it , you can't offend anyone because it is still going on in all races. There are those who think it's not true.
    When I write I tell it as I see it a live it. And those who dare not response do not upset me because they never responsive to my work any way, they read it to increase their work.
    Oh well.
    Cookie

reply by robyn corum on 11-Sep-2019
    You'll have to go to my portfolio - unless you got a notice for it in your mailbox. It's called 'strange white people'
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A very well-written poem about the sins we had while the devil had a hold on us, once we are free of him there is no turning back.

A few typos

My body is letting me down
as I used to be so fit.(?) delete sign
Getting old is (.)Pure.. Shit delete fullstop
got to get me some more crack.

If it's your will, I'ill(I'll)see tomorrow


 Comment Written 10-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
    Good Morning
    Thank you for taking time to read my poem,I'm honored the you enjoy and understood the message.
    have a blessed day.
    Cookie
    Cookie
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God's plans will always be greater than our disappointments. He's sacrificed his life for us, look he's trying to rid of the devil if when he's putting his self at risk, it's amazing.
- Anntonette J


 Comment Written 10-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
    Good Morning
    Thank you for taking time to read my poem,I'm honored the you enjoy and understood the message.
    Have a blessed day.
    Cookie
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You have written a journey and a story here in this poem of lost then regained Faith and belief, no matter how far we fall our Lord will neither abandon or forget us, very well done, I love the chosen artwork****kahpot


 Comment Written 10-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
    Good Morning
    Thank you for taking time to read my poem,I'm honored the you enjoy and understood the message.
    Have a blessed day.
    Cookie

reply by kahpot on 10-Sep-2019
    The honor is mine to read this work****kahpot

reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
    Thank you and have a blessed day.
    Cookie
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An Act of kindness can change a man life, and your proved this - "Laying on the ground asleep
someone touched my dirty feet
He handed me a basket saying, "Here eat"
Slowly our eyes did meet.

With a half smile I gave thanks
No, Not to me I don't rank
His words only I could hear
" Let others, know you were once there." Thank you so much for sharing.


 Comment Written 10-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
    Good Morning
    Thank you for taking time to read my poem,I'm honored the you enjoy and understood the message.
    Have a blessed day.
    Cookie

reply by Iza Deleanu on 10-Sep-2019
    Thank you
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Rosemary Everson1
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In life, we walk many paths; either it be a right or a wrong path is our choice. Whatever path you chose, I hope it's the narrow path. Tomorrow can be a fresh start; I find that prayer helps much.


 Comment Written 09-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
    Good Morning
    Thank you for taking time to read my poem,I'm honored the you enjoy and understood the message.Yes Prayers is the key word.
    Have a blessed day.
    Cookie
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