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Exceptional
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"Unconditional Love's
"Is a 5-7-5 Writting Prompt Entry"
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
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Good luck with this and I too am a Mormon LatterDay Saint Priest with the Church of Jesus Christ.


 Comment Written 27-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
    Hi Ricky, OMG sweet guy...thank you so much for going back and reading my poem...I love this picture...thank you for all your lovely stars...and a wonderful review...God Bless...love xxoo

reply by Ricky1024 on 28-Oct-2019
    My pleasure Miss Linda.
    Haven't seen your work for a while going on the way back to the times of Cheryl Mel Woods.
    Ricky

reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
    I am on and off...spending time with my family in Florida...trying to help my brother out...but I hope to settle some day...and be able to write steady again...smiling big...xxoo Linda
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Beautiful artwork choice. Good alliterations with pups-pure, God's-gift and soft-snow. It all worked together nicely. You could probably get all the pets in pounds adopted. Great message in a poem :)


 Comment Written 25-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
    Hi Alicia, thank you so much for going back and reading my poem...
    I am so glad you like it...I love the artwork...it would be wonderful to have all the pets in the pounds adopted...thank you for a wonderful review...love Linda xxoo
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How sweet is this! Yes, we are all part of God's creation. Sometimes I despair with all the sickos in the world who kill and fight in the name of God.

The image and your words are heartwarming, Linda. Hugs, Lou


 Comment Written 15-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
    Hi Lou, I know what you are saying...thank you sweet girl for
    going back and reading my poem...I am so glad you like it...
    thank you so very much...big hugs and love back at you...xxoo
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Hello Linda: I just popped in for a few minutes and seen this beautiful entry. You have written about two of my favorite subjects. My last dog was a yellow lab like the one Jesus is holding, he passed 3 years ago. He was at my side for 15 years.

So now they are both at my side (Jesus and Rowdy) every day and I can feel their presence at times. The picture that you used is just perfect for your words. No wonder it won a ribbon.

CONGRATULATIONS...Bill


 Comment Written 16-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
    Hi Bill, so good to see you sweet guy...and so glad to have you drop by...these are two of my favorite subjects as well...both give unconditional love...thank you for a sooooo wonderful review my friend...and all your lovely stars...love to ya...Linda
    were having another great day today...but it still rains at night...and that's ok...I love the sound of rain when I go to bed...like music...I hope things have cooled off for you...I hate being stuck in the house because it's to hot to go out...or to cold...and I here this is going to be a cold one...the weather has changed do much...otherwise...all is well...and I hope things are good for you...take care...God Bless...xxoo
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Amen to that. We are so blessed in many ways and our pets is one of the most fulfilling, sweet, and happy gifts we could ever receive. I love the image of Jesus with the puppy. Marilyn


 Comment Written 15-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
    Hi Marilyn, I love love the picture as well...and both...God and dogs show us unconditional love...thank you my sweet friend for a wonderful review...so glad you like it...love you...Linda xxoo
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Lovely poem. I am a dog lover, puppies are even better!. I don't write poetry, so am impressed by with the succinctness and meaning of the thoughts within the syllable count.

Thank you for sharing.

Char


 Comment Written 15-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
    Hi Char, I love dogs as well...I truly love all animals...thank you so much for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...and you are so very welcome...love Linda xxoo
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Clearly sheep can be related to anyone or anything that needs to be cared for, fed and led with love. Most certainly a small puppy can fit this description. True lambs have most often been the ones most often thought of when referenced as sheep, bu the bible also often refere to humans as sheep who need to be cared fr and led like the animals known as sheep.


 Comment Written 15-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
    Hi Nolan, my two favorite subjects my sweet friend...God and his amazing creation...a dog...both love us unconditionally...thank you so much for a wonderful review...so good to see you...hope you are doing well...love Linda xxoo

reply by nomi338 on 17-Sep-2019
    Thank you. The love you extend to me is send back to you increased by 100 times intensity. I think that you are Grrreat!

reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
    your pretty awesome yourself...smiling big...much love xxoo
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I don't think I have ever seen Jesus in a picture holding a dog before! So this is a first for me and your accompanying words are loving and endearing, much enjoyed, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 15-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
    Hi Dolly, thank you so very much for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...I love the picture as well...dogs love us unconditionally..as does God...thank you...
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A nice thought to show Jesus gingerly holding the puppy.
We all were put here by the Lord so it's very appropriate I think. The picture is beautiful!
God bless!
Patty


 Comment Written 15-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
    Patty, I love the picture as well...thank you for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...God Bless you as well...love Linda xxoo
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I count 5-7-5 syllable lines as per writing prompt entry requirement. The first two lines compliment each other well, and the last empathic line gives a new meaning. Great job! Beautiful artwork choice for theme.


 Comment Written 14-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
    Hi Wry, thank you so very much for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...I love the picture as well...thank you...
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