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Pansy


Some flowers grow wild

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The author's words were engaging, interesting and creative. The
reader enjoyed the read of this poem. The artwork is perfect and
compliments this poem well.


 Comment Written 15-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this poem. Appreciate the review.
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Hi Brett, wow I liked this a lot and I think it would make some great song lyrics. I wish I could write music. I actually hummed along as I read your wonderful poem. All the best. Ulla:)))


 Comment Written 15-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this poem. Appreciate your insights and the review.
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Hi Brett. Things aren't the way they are here in the U.S. when in foreign places. Your poem gets right down to the nitty gritty. Well illustrated. I am unsure of the significance of the lovely pansy, though. I must be missing something. "They gave me a pansy on a line."
Marilyn


 Comment Written 14-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this poem. Appreciate your review.
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Well looks like he didn't pay attention while on the island.i It has a nightly curfew it seems no one ever let him know about it. nice work up for this one.


 Comment Written 14-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this poem. Nassau is not about the Bahamas, but several reviewers thought it was and that is okay. Appreciate your insights and the review.

reply by country ranch writer on 15-Sep-2019
    Smiles

reply by country ranch writer on 15-Sep-2019
    Smiles
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I think Guccis is a simple plural without an apostrophe... apart from that you've come up with something very, very clever. It would make a great song. I'm unsure whether pansies are just the flowers or whether they're street slang for something else, but that's my problem, not yours.


 Comment Written 13-Sep-2019



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    Glad you enjoyed this poem. Appreciate your insights and the review.
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Very nice poem you have shared. It has a smooth and easy flow from start to finish. I enjoyed your use of imagery using your words and the story you told. Thanks for sharing.


 Comment Written 13-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this poem. Appreciate your insights and the review.
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I assume this is Free Verse since it lacks rhyme and meter. The story line is interesting and follows a logical progression making it easy to follow the action. The climax is a mixture of hope and despair as the main character gets out of one jail and ends up heading straight to another one. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.


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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this poem. Appreciate your insights and the review.
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I've been to Nassau and they are pretty strict on that Island. . . unless you stay inside at a bar. My husband could have ended up in the Nassau City Jail. Interesting writing and a fun tale. . .I especially enjoy the pasy photo, it is beautiful. Good luck with this piece.


 Comment Written 13-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
    The Nassau in this poem was not intended to be in the Bahamas, however, several reviewers decided it was, so that is okay. Appreciate your comments and the review.

reply by moongirlwriter on 15-Sep-2019
    :)
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This sounds very much like a song Brett. The lyrics are like those those slightly cryptic song lyrics that have jailor's who consider the inmates as a little bereft and treat them as a little subhuman. An excellent work, presented with panache and skill, well done, blessings, Roy


 Comment Written 13-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this poem. Appreciate your insights and the review. Could be Country lyrics. I am known to pen them.

reply by royowen on 15-Sep-2019
    Well done
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I guess if you live in Nassau you don't want to be out picking pansies after curfew. Of course, if someone was in my yard picking mine at 4am I'd be a little creeped out and happy to see him in the city jail.


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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this poem. Appreciate the review.
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