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Silent Stream


A look at time and the mind

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Comment by
Willie P. Smith
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Excellent question. "Are humans a part of nature or an experiment in time." Having been in law Enforcement for forty years, I some times believe some humans came from a lab beaker. Of course, I know we are a product of God, however, after he makes us we are on our own. Good work.


 Comment Written 21-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 21-Sep-2019
    thanks Willie
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Susan X Smith
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This is an interesting poem with a rhythm and rhyme that works most of the time. I am guessing that the meaning of the silent stream is the universal subconscious. The image is lovely and adds to the piece.


 Comment Written 21-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 21-Sep-2019
    Universal Unconscious
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