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It Happened In The Full Moon Bar (This one's just for fun!)

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An amusing poem. People do strange things when they've been drinking. Reminds me of the news story the other day of a woman who dreamed she swallowed her engagement ring while sleeping. She awoke to find that she really did. Marilyn


 Comment Written 23-Sep-2019



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    Glad you enjoyed this poem. Appreciate your insights and the review.
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A very well-written fun poem about the little green Man and the reaction he gets from normal human beings when they see the one eyed green Man sharing their space on earth


 Comment Written 22-Sep-2019



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This was a fun review.
Sorta Star Wars on a Trek on the Moon?
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Green Cheese, Moon Crater, Sea of Tranquility?
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This read and flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
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All were Excellent and Exceptional.
Doctor Ricky 1024



 Comment Written 22-Sep-2019



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Oh my you had me reeled in until I read the last line, very imaginative and so totally an easy read to bring us in to the scene and then totally blow minds. Nice rhyme and flow


 Comment Written 22-Sep-2019



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This is a fun and silly little poem. The rhyming is good, but the rhythm could use a tweak here and there. It's just for fun, though, so what the heck! Nice job.


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    Appreciate the review.
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Who knows what one can see if one has enough to drink Brett, the eyes can certainly play trick on one. Well done my friend, an excellent post, the pace of the poem was good, written articulately in no fixed mater, and abcb rhyming. Well done, blessings, Roy


 Comment Written 22-Sep-2019



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    Well done
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This is an entertaining poem. It held my interest throughout and the humorous ending did not disappoint. The rhyme scheme worked well within it. Thanks for sharing.


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Ha ha ha, not the outcome I expected and you made me smile Brett, this is a fun write and I try and avoid irish bars, too many drunks in them!

I thought I would give you a suggest for these two sentences:

"The guilty will get a sentence
But, which of us to blame"

"The guilty will get sentenced
which one of us is to blame."

Love Dolly x


 Comment Written 22-Sep-2019



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Ouch ouch ouch... fun indeed... like a mini bar room brawl occasioned by an alien! Maybe the bar should be renamed The Green Man! Mind, it's not the first time, since they "always" want to fight!


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