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I really appreciate the imagination it requires to create a weird, yet comprehensible alter-world. You are to be commended.

Honestly, it's not my cup of tea. Not your fault. J. R. R. bored me.

I don't have the knack for new languages and cultures when there are so many old ones yet to explore.

Best of luck, my friend.

Peace, Lee


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    Thanks much, Lee. I have to say it's not my cup of tea either. It's another rung I forced myself to climb in the ladder of self-improvement. If I don't stretch, I don't grow. I REALLY appreciate your taking the time to read and provide such kind encouragement. It's especially meaningful to me when I try something different like this.
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Very well written The plot is sinuous. The characters are complex. The transformation is indeed painful.

You end on a cliffhanger. So I can't say there was resolution. However you met the requirements of the prompt.

"plumbuttocks" did you mean "plump buttocks"?

Best of luck.

Blessings Julia

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 Comment Written 22-Sep-2019



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    Thanks so much, Julia. This is another of those personal challenges I push myself to do as it contains horror, violence, and eroticism all of which are way outside my comfortable little box. I REALLY appreciate your taking the time to read and provide such encouraging feedback. I am grateful for the catch on the SPAG and have made the correction.
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You've done extremely well Monica. You might be interested in reading a writer called "Scongrove" here on fanstory, she's got a series here on fanstory, she manages to weave in a God-based slant into her series, a group called the "Breedline", who are shape-shifting wolves, I think this story is quite definitely worthy of repetition. Excellent, a wonderful story, it has all the ingredients with that clever middle plot to give it impetus, well done, blessings, Roy

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 Comment Written 22-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 22-Sep-2019
    Thanks much, Roy. I thought it a good way to honor my one horror a month promise to Dean and stretch myself as erotic is not in my general topic base LOL. I have read her Breedline work and it is very good.

reply by royowen on 22-Sep-2019
    I understand, I can?t write horror for the life of me.
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