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Night Waltz


He dances with his ghost lover

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I like your mysterious night waltz dancing. It seems he's very connected with his beloved ghost. I like the metaphorical "shore in the dark."

Was this for the last 3-6-9 contest? That one usually asks for three stanzas so if you enter the contest that's due in April, I'd suggest to do three stanzas of 3-6-9.


 Comment Written 28-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 29-Oct-2019
    Thanks so much. Oh, I better check on if I entered it in something!! Thanks.
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This is a lovely and romantic 3-6-0 poem, my friend. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Best wishes in the contest with this delightful entry~Debbie


 Comment Written 24-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
    Thank you for the encouragement and really nice remarks. Very thoughtful!
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I like the waltz. The male in the picture looks like a ghost wherest the female looks more human. She returns to heaven after dancing the waltz with you. What a sad ending and a good beginning for a story, should you desire.
Lovely aesthetics.


 Comment Written 24-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 24-Sep-2019
    Aw, thanks much for the compliment. Never considered it to be the beginning of a story, but I will now!
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