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I like the image this creates in my mind. It's quite an interesting way of saying it. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this poem and I think it paints a wonderful picture.


 Comment Written 23-Jan-2020



reply by the author on 25-Jan-2020
    Much appreciated. GMG
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That is very pretty visual imagery. Well thought out and clearly written. I liked the ending alliteration; golden-gown. It made the poem memorable. Nice work :)


 Comment Written 25-Oct-2019



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    Much appreciated.
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Love the image of this personification. "Cuddle" is a favorite word of mine because of the connotation. Alliteration of golden gown made me fall in love with Autumn. :-) Now if you could do that with Winter...


 Comment Written 29-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
    Much appreciated. G
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As the year draws in,
Summer cuddles up inside
Autumn's golden gown.

Wow what an image I get when I read this very well done contest entry for the 5-7-5. Love the words cuddles, and golden gown


 Comment Written 28-Sep-2019



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    many thanks
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Hi G. Good word choices describe this cozy poem. We all wish to snuggle with autumn's chill. Best of luck in the contest with this fine entry. Marilyn


 Comment Written 28-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
    cheers Marilyn
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Very good entry for the 5-7-5 contest, Gareth. I like the way you personify Summer and Autumn. And instead of any animosity, you bring them together, with Summer seeking solace in Autumn rather than Autumn pushing her out of the way. The perfect word there is "cuddles". And I like the alliteration in "golden gown", lifted with the background color.
Good Luck! and thanks for sharing!
Cheers,
Kimbob


 Comment Written 28-Sep-2019



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    Much appreciated. G
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I love the use of the word "cuddles". One word that can describe warmth, happiness and comfort all snuggled up in the arms of Autumn. Just love this poem, and wish you well in the contest.
Brenda.x


 Comment Written 27-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
    Many thanks, Brenda. G
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I like the idea here, of the year curling up for a comfortable sleep in the golden glow of autumn. Plenty of color and a nice peaceful feel to this estory


 Comment Written 27-Sep-2019



reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
    Much appreciated, as always. G
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very nice visual. That's the way it happens EVERY year doesn't it? Too bad you couldn't have found an image to go with the poem. . .but the background eludes to the Autumn that you are speaking of. . .good luck.


 Comment Written 27-Sep-2019



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    many thanks

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    :)
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This is a lovely 5-7-5 about autumn. I like the use of personification in this well worded poem. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie


 Comment Written 27-Sep-2019



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    much appreciated. G
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