If there's a window in heaven where messages are read... I know she heard you, Jaybird. You are very steep with your poetry. I can feel your emotions as they pass the heart. Your 25 years my senior I hope I have love in my heart like you. Thank you for sharing a piece of yours.
This is a very well-written, moving, romantic poem spoken from the standpoint of a lovelorn man whose love has said goodbye. Of course, your notes tell how well that worked out. Line 1: Then should be than.
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