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Could I Be Losing You


Trying to rebuild a fading love

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If there's a window in heaven where messages are read... I know she heard you, Jaybird. You are very steep with your poetry. I can feel your emotions as they pass the heart. Your 25 years my senior I hope I have love in my heart like you. Thank you for sharing a piece of yours.


 Comment Written 28-Sep-2019


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Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. I am very sorry for your loss. You were so fortunate to be able to have the happiness you sought


 Comment Written 28-Sep-2019


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Just imagining, she is no more, but you are trying as you wish to rebuild a fading love in memories and appealing to her to make your love as bright as noon, well said, well done.


Typos:
More then I could realize -- More than I could realize
from the morn, til fullest moon -- from the morn till full moon or from the morn till the full moon


 Comment Written 28-Sep-2019


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Janice Canerdy
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This is a very well-written, moving, romantic poem spoken from the standpoint of a lovelorn man whose love has said goodbye. Of course, your notes tell how well that worked out. Line 1: Then should be than.

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 Comment Written 28-Sep-2019


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I am so sorry about your loss but am glad you had that kind of love. The poem left me feeling wanted and loved. Very well done.

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 Comment Written 28-Sep-2019


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