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Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "The Pink Dragon"

An aging knight finds a clutch of dragon eggs

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Another excellent chapter in your fanciful tale about the dragons and the dangers they face in that kingdom. I like how you continue to develop the individual dragons and their differences. Bill


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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
    Thanks. I'm so glad you're still enjoying it.
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No wonder the red dragon was so determined to attack the pink dragon even before it hatched. It knew that the pink sibling would be the one to control it. Love the way you write about them and looking forward to following the story.
I consider myself lucky with my flightless dragons that live in my garden as they keep pests under control. The water monitor is the rough one as it loves to eat my best looking Koi carp!
Best,


 Comment Written 04-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
    Thanks for the six! I agree, you are lucky to have them in your garden. You must live someplace warm. We don't have many reptiles in this my of the world.
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Your imagination is so refreshing! I love each and every dragon! I can't wait to see how they develop. Glad the pink one has gotten the fire starter under control! I love how each has its own unique personality and also the concept of determining later which sex to become! So creative! xoxo


 Comment Written 03-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
    Thanks. People do like to tell me I have a wild imagination. Might as well put it to good use. Glad you're enjoying the story.

reply by Diana L Crawford on 04-Oct-2019
    write on you wild woman, you! LOL!
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This was a very well written story. My daughter loves dragons and she would love to hear more about the pink dragon. Thank you for sharing


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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
    Thanks. More should be coming later tonight.
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Man your story is wrapping up so beautifully. The story has finece, and nothing is forced into the narrative. My favorite is still the water dragon. Thank you for sharing yet another amazing chapter.


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    Thanks. These wonderful reviews keep me motivated to keep writing it.
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Hello Cindy Warren

You know with out a doubt how to keep us readers desiring-to read to keep a reader desiring to keep reading your fiction story about the eggs hatching and telling us each of the dargons personality, so far are great.

Gert


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    Thanks. Your reviews keep me motivated to keep writing it.

reply by Gert sherwood on 02-Oct-2019
    You are welcome Cindy Warren
    Gert
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Again, you introduce us to another interesting character in the green dragon. A very creative, imaginative write. With such interesting dragon characters, we can just wait to see what happens to the humans while we adjust to so many new dragons in the world. Wish we had something like that these days. The world could use a few stabilizing influences. Well done, Cindy.


 Comment Written 01-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
    Thanks for the six!. Yes, the world needs all the help it can get. Too bad I can't bring them from the page into reality.
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I enjoyed your chapter, Cindy. Good job with the dialogue with the dragons. It makes for some interesting reading. The last little dragon seemed so cute. The red one sure is feisty. I like how you emphasize about Aaron listening to the water dragon Thanks for sharing. Respectfully with Love, Jan.

The red one jumped of (off)


 Comment Written 01-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
    Thanks. I'm so glad you're still enjoying the story. That little red one has turned out to be a favorite.
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Ha! Aaron called the red dragon's bluff. She may turn out to be sweet once she realizes no one's threatening her. It will be said when Aaron has to let them go, but I suspect there will be many adventures before then.


 Comment Written 01-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
    Thanks. The red dragon is still plenty feisty, but the dunking in the pail has taken her down a notch.
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So the sassy red dragon knows she's met her match. I like the device of using the pink dragon to pass on dragon lore to Aaron.

Another well written chapter, Cindy.

Blessings Julia


 Comment Written 01-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 01-Oct-2019
    Thanks. That red one still has plenty of sass.
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