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Mens Attention Deficit Disorder


Men get help from an unlikely place

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Drunks will always pay attention to women if the women are near-naked they will closer attention unless the women are wives.
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 Comment Written 07-Oct-2019



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    Thanks!

reply by Rikki66 on 17-Oct-2019
    Welcome.
    Rikki
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This is too funny. I'm sure the club caused a heck of breakthrough lol. This is a well-written piece of flash fiction. Interesting, believable start to finish, nicely done. Good luck with your contest.


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This is an excellent read. The whole thing is a giggle, but I love the acronym. How long did it take you to come up with that one? Good luck in the contest.


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Ha ha... I don't think their wives would be happy at the treatment they chose. By the way, MADD is a verrrry well known organization--Mothers Against Drunk Drivers. You might want to give yours a different acronym.


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    Thanks! You have to admit that there would be a lot of MADD women out there over it. Not as serious as drunk driving though. But my thoughts also ran to the old MAD magazines.
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Hello...it's 2:00am and MY attention is probably on its own type of disorder...I'm having trouble following the line of therapy...like who's zooming who(m). Did I miss a chapter? - Lobber ... 3*s for discombobulation


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The way to a man's heart is obviously not through his stomach it seems here! This is a fun write and of course tapping into what makes males tick helps, much enjoyed, love Dolly x


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Cute story told in the allowable space for the flash fiction prompt. It certainly is something I'd not heard of before. I doubt if the wives would approve, lol. Good luck.


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I love your word choice of "sway" as is persons to the motion of the girls as well as their command over the men's attention. The comment about their wives was a nice touch to end with a clever punch line


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