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Aaron's Dragons


Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "The Page"

An aging knight finds a clutch of dragon eggs

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Hello again Cindy, hope your Thursday is going well. I think I may have read the last two chapters out of order. That being said, I enjoyed this chapter as well. I found it just as engaging and I may have enjoyed it a little more. Great job!


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    Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it. I think if you reversed the chapters you'd still be able to sort it out. Hope you will stay tuned for more.
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Hi Cindy. This is a fascinating and well written chapter to your story. Excellent descriptions and dialogue. Good detail which backs up your story line. Marilyn


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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
    Thanks, I'm so glad you are enjoying it.
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Great chapter! I feel like I'm invested in this story now and want to know where Duane came from. Good job with the dialogue and interesting story line. Keep it up!


 Comment Written 09-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
    Thanks. Duane has his reasons for not wanting to say who he is.
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This is a fine chapter I would like the name of the proceeding chapters so I can catch up. I'm a great dragon fan and wrote a story about a blue dragon. I think yours will be better.


 Comment Written 07-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
    Thanks. I hope you will enjoy catching up. The previous chapters should be available in my portfolio.
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A page is a darn nice touch at this point in the story. Poor Aaron is being pulled every which way. Help is necessary. Nice touch. I'm happy to follow along and see how you and Aaron cope with your clutch of dragons. It's a charming story.


 Comment Written 07-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
    Thanks. Yep, Aaron has his hands full.
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I appreciate this chapter in your book about the dragons. You have got a great book going. I look forward to the next chapter with the adventure of the boy, the dragons and his newly found page.
Bill


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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
    Thanks. I just posted the next chapter.
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Our little hero got another human helping hand, that must be good for the little team of dragons. I like how the boy said that before he was found he was dead. Thank you for sharing and waiting for the next chapter.


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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
    Thanks. Obviously he wasn't dead, but he could have been. I thought Aaron needed some help, and somebody to talk to.
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That was quick thinking of Aaron doing what he did. I hope the pink dragon is right and the boy doesn't betray him. Otherwise, Aaron might be in a world of hurt. The story is very well-written, interesting start to finish. I look forward to reading more.


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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2019
    Thanks. Yes, Aaron could be in trouble, but the dragon and the witch are pretty clever. He has his own reasons for not running to the king.
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Thank you for not making us wait too long for the next chapter! So glad he has a companion now. And it is obviously a godsend for "Duane" too. Purple is my favorite color so excited to see how this hatching unfolds!! xoxo


 Comment Written 06-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
    Thanks. I thought Aaron needed a little help, and someone to talk to besides his horse.

reply by Diana L Crawford on 06-Oct-2019
    Yes I agree! LoL!
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I'm so glad for both Aaron and Duane to come together. They both need someone. The dragons seem to be accepting him. Another dragon on the way, and purple. I'm eager to see what this one will be able to do.


 Comment Written 06-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
    Thanks. Yes, they need each other and I need someone for Aaron to talk to besides his horse! And the dragons, of course.
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