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A look at times entrance

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Comment by
Iza Deleanu
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Very clever usage of the word Eden (could be a person or could be a the equivalent of Heaven). That is how life starts :"Time begins
Eden opens her hands
to a spiraling wavelength of light" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.


 Comment Written 08-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
    Thank you for the review.
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Y. M. Roger
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A beautiful poem Yvon that certainly paints an emotional picture with the words alone...although that pic really boosts the mind's engagement! ;) I would remind, however, that the contest requires THREE stanzas of 3-6-9 not a single. :) :) Thanx for sharing and good luck! ;)


 Comment Written 08-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
    Thanks. Misread the rules. Oh well!
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