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Pterodactyl Club


The Case of the Walsingham Rabbit

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BeasPeas
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Hi Brett. I think you're off to a fine start with your new novel with this chapter. Word choices are unique and keep the story rolling along. The pterodactyl club seems to be one which attempts to save innocent people from execution, although we don't know if that's its sole purpose. We know how it got its name but not its function. I think readers will want to know this. Your writing is clear and interesting. (I like the reference to lemon meringue ~ my fave.) Marilyn


 Comment Written 10-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this story. Appreciate your insights and the review.
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Very interesting! This doesn't seem to be part of a book... or is it? In any case, I'm a fan so I should find any more chapters/stories in this set.


 Comment Written 09-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Appreciate the nit catch, your insights, and the review.
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I like that you brought the story to Life by labeling the characters with their special handicaps.
I'm not sure if you're going to continue it but he didn't finish it basically you left your review or wondering if your friend in jail is going to stay there and die?
Thanks we'll done.
Doctor Ricky 1024


 Comment Written 09-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciatethe review.

reply by Ricky1024 on 11-Oct-2019
    I just started write a Fairytale
    Robbing a Pepsi Warehouse.
    I labeled my characters too.
    Ricky

reply by Ricky1024 on 11-Oct-2019
    "Complete Action!"
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Hey, Brett -- I'm guessing this is Part 1 (just didn't see it noted, but there's too much of a cliffhanger otherwise....)....? A great start, sir -- Love the fact that it's a group of crime-solving Seniors with their own group of hackers, information hacks, and more... so very cool!! ;) :) And do they know a judge... who might be a friend somehow... ? Ooooo... I'm hooked and look forward to the next chapter!! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette


 Comment Written 09-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
    Yes, this is part one. Glad you enjoyed the chapter. Appreciate your insights and the review.
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This is a very well-written interesting chapter. It's a promising beginning to your story. Writing fiction in the first person is hard to do but it served your story well. Your dialogue lets the reader get an idea of what your character is like, a no-nonsense kind of guy, nice job.


 Comment Written 09-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this story. Appreciate the review.
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Your story it's a mystery indeed and there is a case of crime, and as all the cases usually the person accused is not quite the author. So who is the killer?
Thanks for sharing and good luck with the continuation of this story.


 Comment Written 09-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this first chapter of my newest book. Appreciate your insights and the review.
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What a well-written story and I love the picture, I love the race against time premise for the story, it keeps the suspense tight. Best of luck with your writing!

Have a great day and God bless.
mike


 Comment Written 09-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this story that begins my newest book. Appreciate your insights and the review.
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