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Noise


Upon hearing a noise during a power outage at night

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This fits the syllabic form perfectly and you developed the sense of fear by listing the conditions that cause that fear - the noise and footsteps in the darkness when alone. Well done!


 Comment Written 19-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
    Thank you so much! Reminds me of the fears of childhood, imagined, of course.
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This 1-9-1 poem, Noises, has the correct set up and puts the reader in the night and near the proverbial bump which gets hearts beating faster and feet moving more swiftly.


 Comment Written 10-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
    Thanks so much for the very kind review and stars!
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Ooooooo....eerie! Great idea to try to deliver an overall atmosphere with this limited format... thanx so much for sharing! :) Good luck at the polls this evening! ;)


 Comment Written 09-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
    Thanks so much for your kind words and review!
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This meets the contest requirements nicely as you deliver a structurally sound 1-9-1 with correct line and syllable count. The content is timely given Halloween is just around the corner. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.


 Comment Written 09-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
    I am blessed with your kind comments!
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You've written an excellent 1-9-1 poem for the contest
Many can remember those scary moments during thunderstorms
or other noises when you are alone and the imagination
takes over.
Nicely done with excellent photograph
Good luck in the contest
Robert


 Comment Written 09-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
    Thanks so much for this really nice review!
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Hello fellow poet a wonderful Wednesday to you. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed the 1-9-1 form of poem quite well. Good job and good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 09-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
    You're very kind with your review, thank you so much. And a happy Wednesday to you, too!
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This is a great piece, very clever. I'm delighted I didn't let it pass. Boy, I can sure relate to this. Powerful emotions in very few words. Nice work. I look forward to reading more of your work.


 Comment Written 09-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
    Thanks so very much for your very kind comments! I so appreciate your review!
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tim dodd
 
 
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what a difficult form to
write i. I think you met the rules
definitely a good entry for such a difficult
form. love that picture of the cloudy night
it would be quite spooky with no power


 Comment Written 09-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
    Yes, very spooky, indeed! Thank you for your great review!
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