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Horror in three sentences contest entry

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Comment by
Rmocruz
 
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I can understand why this well written brief thriller is a winner.
You have masterfully conformed to the writing prompt.
The photo-art selection is appropriate to enhance this dark theme.


 Comment Written 07-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
    Thank you, Rmocruz for the awesome review.
    God bless
    Steve
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Ideasaregems-Dawn
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Congratulations on a story well-told in only three sentences. It's gruesome, and perfect horror!

I missed the opportunity to vote, thanks to not being here often enough these days. I WAS checking my messages and finding no notification that voting had begun yet...

But I might very well have voted for this anyway, in spite of the fact that I had an entry in. *grin*(But this type of thing is the reason I seldom enter anything but site-sponsored contests. I can't live my life waiting for the judges to decide they have time to monitor the contest... after that first notice is sent out saying 'the deadline has been reached'. I DID see that one.)


 Comment Written 17-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
    Thank you, Dawn, for the awesome review my, friend. As you can see I miss a few days at a time as well lol. I work too much, unfortunately. I enjoyed the challenge this prompt offered.
    God bless
    Steve

reply by Ideasaregems-Dawn on 21-Oct-2019
    You're most welcome. :)
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Justin Chopin
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Great horrific story Neon. Impressed that you were able to describe how your psychopath was able to use his blade to cut through his victims skin was very vivid. Well done.


 Comment Written 17-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
    Thank you, Justin. I enjoyed this little prompt as well as this excellent review.
    God bless
    Steve

reply by Justin Chopin on 17-Oct-2019
    You're welcome Steve.
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David R. Davis
 
 
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Generally not my kind of story, but that was very good. At once horrifying. Thank you for sharing and I damned sure don't want to meet you in some dark alley. Well done. Go well.


 Comment Written 17-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
    LOL! Thank you, David, for this most excellent review.
    God bless
    Steve
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AvL
 
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Neonewman -- whose online moniker could be translated as "new, new man" -- bloody well attacks his subject-matter in three chilling lines. The machete brings to mind the hockey-masked mass-murderer of "Halloween" fame. I remain "sanguine" for the future of this author.


AvL


 Comment Written 16-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 17-Oct-2019
    Wow! Thank you Haiku-guy for this most excellent review my, friend. I enjoyed the challenge this one brought. (Sanguine) love this word.
    God bless
    Steve

reply by AvL on 17-Oct-2019
    To NNM:

    Be well.


    AvL
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Cindy Warren
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You're hired. I'll send you my hit list tomorrow. LOL Just kidding. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved. You said it all in just three sentences.


 Comment Written 16-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
    LOL! Thank you for the awesome review.
    God bless
    Steve
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Sharon Haiste
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Yikes.
I can see why this one the Horror Story contest.
You have painted a picture of true horror in only 3 senteces, not easy to do.
Well done.
Sharon


 Comment Written 16-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
    Thank you, Sharon. I enjoyed the challenge.
    God bless
    Steve
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This is a great piece of work. You managed to bring a feeling of terror to your reader's minds in just three short sentences.

Dean would have been very excited about reading this one.

Congratulations on a well-deserved win...Bill


 Comment Written 16-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
    Thank you, Bill, for this awesome review. I certainly miss Dean, his reviews were always entertaining and helpful.
    God bless
    Steve
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Iza Deleanu
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Yup this is a horror dark story indeed. We have the prey and the victim of course must lose its body. Good luck with the contest and thank you for sharing.


 Comment Written 16-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
    Thank you, Iza. I enjoyed this little prompt.
    God bless
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tfawcus
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I think that all the contest requirements have been met in your response to this challenge. You have created a macabre and chilling scenario of a mentally deranged person on the loose with a machete.


 Comment Written 15-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 16-Oct-2019
    Thank you, Tony, for the awesome review my friend.
    God bless
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