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Viewing comments for Chapter 88 "My Children, I Miss You"

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Barb, that is such a soulfully sad story. The poem tells it all so gently and with deep sadness. How wonderful that you could write such a touching poem about your grief and your hopes of Heaven. That must have devastated you for some time and I applaud you for your strength in the present day. God Bless and keep you safe.


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    for two years I turned my back on God, but now I understand that He cried too. Thank you
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Barb,

I'm so sorry for your loss. I have not lost any of my own children, so I can't begin to imagine the pain and grief. I had a friend whose husband was killed in a train accident. How horrible for all.

You express your emotions so well in this poem. It brings tears to my eyes. You have such a unique and lovely poetic style. I love reading all your posts.

Sincerely Joy xx


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    It is a unique club that does not need any more members, but I still try to reach that one to let them know they are not alone. Thank you so much for making my day
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Oh dear God - the grief - all of them gone in a flash. Only with God's help could you deal with this terrible loss. My heart goes out to you so much - even tho it's been twenty year s- the memories are alive - May God continue to hold you close and bless you. I have tears with you.



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    I try to use my poetry to tell someone else that they are not alone and they have to survive to keep the memories alive. Thank you so much for the wonderful words
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This is a beautiful poem. It is so heartbreaking. I just can't imaginw what you have been through.I am so glad that you have such strong faith. Thanks for sharing. Jen.


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    I am honored and I thank you so very much.
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Hi Barb and nice work here.
Our pains?
Our losses?
Our needs?
...
Time....
And, only time...
Shall salve the wounds
And relinquish the Pain and Misery.
....
Thanks again for sharing about your family.
Ricky


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    You understand, we are one, thank you
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The poem made me cry. Then the notes really made me cry. My heart goes out to you. I hope that writing about those precious loved ones is cathartic for you. This is a LOVELY poem, so well-written and moving!


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    I just try to reach the ones that feel that they are alone, thank you so much
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I feel your sense of loss in these words Barb and this was such a tragic event that has left devastating in its wake. Your poem is warm and heartfelt, and your faith supports and heals, sad but soothing words here, love Dolly x


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    I just try to reach the ones that feel that they are alone, thank you so much
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My mother lost her first born in a tragic accident and only when she was 82 dis she finally share the events of that tragic day with me. We both cried and hugged each other until the tears finally stopped. No one should ever have to go through such a tragic experience. Please know, my thoughts and prayers are with your


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    You understand, we are one, Thank you so very much for sharing, that is the part I love best about reivews

reply by Sasha on 17-Oct-2019
    Knowing someone else has experienced a tragidy doesn't aways help you deal with your. My mother was fortunate and had the support of her family.
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You did a great job with your tribute poem, Barb. Your rhymes are good, the flow is smooth, and there is good imagery. I like how you can 'see' your family in Heaven and know that you will join them when the time is right. Thanks for the notes, although I knew of your story from what you have shared on FS. Respectfully with Love, Jan


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    I just try to reach the ones that feel that they are alone, thank you so much
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Thank you for sharing how you have walked this painful journey of loss and by holding God's Hand throughout these years, you are able to have peace and know the joy that they enjoy now and that same joy awaits you and all those who believe and trust!


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    I just try to reach the ones that feel that they are alone, thank you so much
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