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Love Letter on a Clipboard #3


More confessions.

  31 total reviews 
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dragonpoet
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This is a good mixture of prose and poetry and is a tale of true love. I think he should let her know who she it. It is weird that he is painting her for her parents with her know he loves her. If he signs the painting she will know. How can this kind of love not be in his eyes when he sees her?
Congrats on placing secondin the contest.
Keep writing
Joan


 Comment Written 10-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
    Thank you, dear Joan. Her responses and letters are in "To My Secret Admirer." I hope you're able to catch those as well. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo

reply by dragonpoet on 11-Nov-2019
    No problem, Sally. I will try to start from the beginning and read both sides.
    Joan
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Diana L Crawford
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Fantastic! This is such a wonderfully romantic work and deserves the highest honor on this site! I am jealous of the perfect man who loves her so much! Will he ever show himself in person? My oh my, I do hope he will! xoxo


 Comment Written 08-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
    So glad you like. My romantics are eating thiis up. I'm so pleased as I'm enjoying this immensely. My husband and I had a long courtship involving much letter writing. I have boxes and boxes.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xoxo
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This is a poignant story, followed by an equally poignant and cleverly-written Nonet, something I haven't had the courage to try. I did notice one thing I wanted to bring to your attention:

This regime I know all too well.
I think in this sentence you meant to say "regimen".


 Comment Written 04-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
    Thank you for your excellent review and critique. It is what I meant to say, as regime implies something forced. Thank you, again. I have repaired it.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo

reply by shaffer40 on 04-Nov-2019
    You're quite welcome for sure.
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Sharon Haiste
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Congratulations on your nominee for Story of the Month.
It is easy to see why your story was chosen.
This is well written and easy to follow. I like the unique style.
Well done and good luck.


 Comment Written 04-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
    Thank you very much for the excellent review of my work and kind compliments. It is so appreciated. I am fanning you now to keep you close to me. This is easiest for me as I am a blind writer.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo
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Sally,

What a wonderful piece of romantic writing. I can see why it made the Story of the Month contest. It has so much heart - glad to see that this man's affections seem to be reciprocated. *smile*

No nits and all joy. Thanks!


 Comment Written 04-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
    Thanks so much for stopping by, dear Robin. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. She replies to him in my articles, 'To My Secret Admirer.' They will go back and forth until Christmas Eve Eve.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo
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I guess I haven't been keeping up with things, I have a ton to read. What have I been doing? My back went out so sitting was very hard, I'm still not 100% but better. Loved this chapter. Can't wait till they meet. Rox


 Comment Written 26-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
    Thank you so much, dear Rox. So sorry about your back, my friend. A love story is good for healing though. I'll do my best and sending up prayers for you now.
    Sally xo
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Rosemary Everson1
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what a loving letter you wrote. I so love to read your writings as well as your other stories I've read. Did you write somewhere that you're thinking about writing a book? or were they continuation stories on FS?


 Comment Written 23-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
    This is a continuing love letter between two people who are at the same Baptist hospital. He confesses his love for her anonymously in 'Love Letter on a Clipboard, chapters one, two and three. ' She responds to him and has fallen in love with his words, in 'To 'My Secret Admirer, chapters one and two.' The two stories will run in tandem until Christmas Eve Eve. The next one is 'To My Secret Admirer #3', I have ready to post next week.

    I hope you'll access my portfolio and catch up. Start with Love Letter on a Clipboard, Chapter one, then, "To My Secret Admirer, chapter one."
    Many thanks for the kind review and I hope to see you next week!
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo
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-Good artwork, story, and nonet, Sally.
-The secret admirer continues his
outpouring of feelings for Kristin.
-He certainly knows a lot that goes on
around the hospital, like Captain Lewis
and the staff's love of chocolate.
-I found this statement quite interesting:
"You've never really seen me as the one
behind these clipboard love letters."
-Then, he reveals he is an artist and is
going to paint a picture of her parents;
I guess he has probably seen them at the hospital.
-I liked the nonet, title, and quotes, too.
-I await Kristin's reply.
-One small typo: inspirition.




 Comment Written 23-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
    Thank you so much for the excellent review, dear Pam. I'm delighted you are still enjoying this ongoing love story. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo

reply by Pam (respa) on 23-Oct-2019
    You are very welcome and deserving, Sally. You are wished the best, too!
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Carla Trinklein
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I love the quotes at the beginning and the end of this installment! I also loved your nonet. I'm glad the writer of the letter acknowledged that she'd have every reason to wonder if he was some "horrible creature". I love that he told her he would wear her tie "proudly"-being able to receive a gift graciously says a lot about a person. Very nice touch to have him paint a picture of her for her parents! That's thinking ahead! I'm as intrigued as ever.


 Comment Written 22-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
    You are my angel with kindest compliments. I'm tickled pink. I am deeply honored once again by this and for the generous six star rating.
    Sending you my best today with many thanks, Carla.
    Sally xoxo
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Pam Norris
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I really enjoyed this piece and didn't want it to end. It left me wondering not least who is he? What operation is she having? Whats the blue tie for?


 Comment Written 22-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
    Thank you very much for the lovely review. These are back and forth love letters. "Love Letter on a Clipboard" is from him, a secret admirer, and "To My Secret Admirer" is from Kristin, as she has fallen in love with this mystery man and his penned confessions of love. They have made a date to meet Christmas Eve Eve. You'll see all these love stories in my portfolio. "To My Secret Admirer #3 airs next week.

    Start with 'Love Letter on a Clipboard, chapter one.'

    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo
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