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Love Letter on a Clipboard #3


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Robert Zimmerman
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Hello Sally. The idea of incorporating a Nonet into a chapter of your book is outstanding. This letter is well written and I like the reference of Kristin being able to handle Captain Lewis. It shows a total picture of the depth of her character aside from the love letters. Well written. Z


 Comment Written 20-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
    Thank you, dear Z. Your kind reviews and comments mean so much. Sending you my best as always,
    Sally :)
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Ah...you are a romantic at heart! This letter is VERY well-done and reeks in sincerity. Great job on the poem as well. Love the Bible verse at the beginning. Enjoyed reading!


 Comment Written 20-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
    It's so true. My husband is very romantic, even after all our years of marriage. We had a long courtship and wrote piles of letters to each other. I am a pro and have had many letters of my own for inspiration for this story. I'm so glad you are staying with this series. Her replies are inmtje posts called, To My Secret Admirer. These two stories will run in tandem until Christmas Eve Eve.
    Sending you my best today with many thanks for your kind review,
    Sally xo

reply by WryWriter on 21-Oct-2019
    You are such a lucky girl! : )
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What a lovely Nonet on the Nines. You did a very good job of relating the love and devotion between these two romantic souls. Well done Sally.

Melissa


 Comment Written 20-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
    My poets love the NonetsI have set inside these stories. I'm glad our enjoyed this along with my personal touch.
    Sending my best as always,
    Sally xo
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Spangle
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You definitely excel at writing the nonet form...and for incorporating it so naturally into the letter portion of your posting. That is very clever and allows the reader to see further into the heart of the poet. xo Janet


 Comment Written 20-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
    Ah, thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed my story and enclosed Nonet.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo
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Beautiful, Sally, just beautiful. I do get the feeling that Captain Lewis is the secret admirer...

I have never tried writing a nonet; you seem to have great proficiency at it. One day I will try my hand at it.

Thanks for sharing this love letter on a clipboard. Have a super Sunday!



 Comment Written 20-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
    Thank you so much, dear Sandra. You are just so very kind. I'm so glad you're enjoying these love stories. 'Love Letter on a Clipboard' and 'To My Secret Admirer' will run in tandem until Christmas Eve Eve. Thanks for being such a faithful reviewer. I know you are a busy lady!
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo

reply by Sandra Elizabeth Williams on 22-Oct-2019
    You are welcome, Sally. I really do enjoy them.

    Have a wonderful and fulfilling week!
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Loved reading this and it looks like I must have missed a bunch of these. A few spags and suggestions. This regime[delete space before comma or even leave comma out altogether] ,
P.[delete space] S.


 Comment Written 20-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
    Thank our very much for the stellar review and six star shower. It means so much and delights me to no end when I see you and Louise's photo looking at me. I have a new keyboard and it's difficult. It's giving me commas, periods and spaces where I do not want them. Thank you for the helpful critique and good eyes. Hopefully, I will get the hang of this new keyboard soon. 'Love Letter on a Clipboard' has three chapters, and 'To My Secret Admirer' has two chapters, and the third one airs next week. I will post it after my newest 'What The Blind Girl Saw' chapter as I nearing the end and moving to publish that as a crime/mystery novella. Thanks again for all your help and support. Sending you both my very best today, and blessings in Christ our Lord,
    Sally xoxo
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So you're telling us the mystery man did not write the Nonet? You wrote it? Well, at least one of you fesses up. If he's an artist, I wonder if that will give her more clues to his identity. We'll have to see through her solving the clues. This is fun for the reader. Watching her solve the puzzle draws the reader in more and more.


 Comment Written 20-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
    It is a mystery and a love story and I threw a Nonet in for good measure. So glad you like.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo
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Maria Jose Garcia
 
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This is beautiful, original and moving, Sally. The character depiction is great and I love all the little details.
You could turn this into a novel!
Thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 20-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
    Thank you so much, Maria. What a sweet compliment. I'm delighted you are enjoying these and I am truly enjoying the write.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo
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Oh, Sally, this is just so beautiful and I love it. The love and care shines through every word. Your nonet poem is outstanding. How I love to follow this story. Warm regards. Ulla xxx


 Comment Written 20-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
    Ah, Im so delighted you enjoy it. Romance is in the air with Lorenzo and with my two characters in What The Blind Girl Saw, Hava and Leo. I love a good old-fashioned romance. Thank you so much for the six stars and kindest compliments. As always, it means so much.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xoxo
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Katherine M. Kean
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This is a commentary for numbers 2 and 3 together, as somehow I managed to miss the former until now. These are very moving letters, and it is lovely to see an example of the lost art (handwritten letters) rejuvenated. My only query is whether perhaps emotions are moving too fast. I don't want the romance to run out of steam before its time.

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
    Ah, it's going full steam until Cjristmas Eve Eve. I'm so pleased you're enjoying this and I thank you for the kind review.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo
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