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Telegram


my life in 150 words

  18 total reviews 
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Rmocruz
 
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I'll have you know I had to refer to my dictionary for "Ceausescu."
I found this life story to be interest and well written with a hint of humor.
"Eight" Did you intend Eighth?
Best wishes in the contest!


 Comment Written 12-Nov-2019


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Robert Zimmerman
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Hello Iza. I like your story. You packed a lot of action into the 150 words. It takes strong verbs and powerful; words to do that. I appreciate your story and I hope you do well in the contest. Robert


 Comment Written 11-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
    Thank you so much for your honest feedback Mr. Robert:)

reply by Robert Zimmerman on 11-Nov-2019
    You're welcome.
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w.j.debi
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It's difficult to distill a life down to 150 words. Your creative approach using a telegram format is a great way to do it. After all, you want telegrams to be a short as possible to get the point across.
I think you did an excellent job.
Best of luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 10-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
    Thank you so much for your honest feedback:)
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tfawcus
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You've managed to cram a remarkable amount into your 150-word autobiography. The reader certainly gains a flavour of who you are and of your personality.


 Comment Written 09-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
    Thank you so much for your honest review.
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Cindy Warren
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I live in Edmonton with my cats too. It sounds like you've had a far more interesting life than I have. I've always lived here. Glad you ended up happy. Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 08-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
    Hi Cindy I am so happy to meet somebody from Edmonton. Life is as happy as it gets the best part is in our imagination:)
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dejohnsrld (Debbie)
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study in Bulgarian. (Bulgaria)

Dad should be capitalized throughout as it is being used as a name.

I would suggest a smaller font, this one is a bit overpowering. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie


 Comment Written 27-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
    Thanks
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Bill Schott
 
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This one-hundred-fifty-word story, Telegram, has the proper word count and really captures a person's life struggles and happy successes in a quaint and pithy post card.


 Comment Written 20-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
    Thank you so much for your kind review
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Sharon Haiste
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I think this is an interesting entry for the Your Life in 150 Words contest.
Writing this as a telegram has allowed you to state your story in a choppy fashion.
Interesting but maybe a little hard to read.
Good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon


 Comment Written 20-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
    Thank you
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Dolly'sPoems
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Yes, your life story in a telegram is a unique way of telling your story here and I enjoyed your unique style, so much crammed into so few words, good luck, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 20-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
    Thank you so much for your kind review and so sorry for my delay in thanking you
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Patty Palmer
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Interesting how dreams come at night and they seem so real! They say it's in your brain that makes you dream real dreams like that. I'm glad you found her.


 Comment Written 20-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
    Thanks
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