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A One Way Trip


Brief autobiography

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Bill Schott
 
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This one-hundred-fifty-word story, A One Way Trip, has the proper word count and fills the limited space with a plethora of memorable events, travels, and color. Sounds like an overall fulfilling life.


 Comment Written 20-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
    Thanks for the nice review.
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You have packed a lot of story into your 150 words essay.
You tell clearly of your emigration and your life in your new country.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon


 Comment Written 20-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019
    Thanks for the kind review.
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It sounds like travel is in your blood and I expect changing countries at a young age instilled the travel bug within your veins, seeing the world always broadens your horizons, I enjoyed your journey here, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 20-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019
    Thanks much for the kind review.
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Your bio is interesting to read. I can imagine how exciting it was to become a U.S. citizen at 6 years old and I think it's cute that you were ready to prove you were not a spy! I see you love to travel. I do too but I don't get the chance to do much. Thanks for sharing your biography with us.
Patty


 Comment Written 20-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 20-Oct-2019
    Thanks for the kind review.
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Hello Writer,
You've an excellent, interesting autobiography for just one hundred and fifty words. Sounds like you've led a full life with marvelous travel destinations.
Must be pretty crowded if those 39 first cousins get together for a holiday. I have 15.
Well done
Good luck in the contest.
Robert




 Comment Written 19-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
    Thanks much for the kind review.
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Oh wow, you have certainly had an interesting life, my friend! It is awesome to know you have Irish heritage. I have always wanted to visit Japan, it is my dream location.


 Comment Written 19-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
    Thanks for the kind review. Actually I wanted to visit China but couldn't find anyone to go with. Then one friend said she'd been to China but not to Japan, so we went to Japan. My only regret is that I did not stay longer.

reply by Bichon on 19-Oct-2019
    I?m sure it is a beautiful country. I would love to spend a few weeks in Tokyo while it is spring.
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You've had a fascinating and adventurous life! I can relate to some of your story as I'm an immigrant, too. I also became a naturalized citizen when I was in middle school. I also have 30-something cousins!

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There were several places I would have put commas but I personally am allergic to commas so won't belabor the point.
"Mom and dad were Irish" (I've learned from grammarians here that 'Mom' and 'Dad' would be capitalized when used instead of a name. If you had said, 'My mom and dad,' then they are not.)


 Comment Written 19-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
    Thanks for the kind review.
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Well done - a quick autobiography - wasn't sure how anyone could sum up their lives in only 150 words - but several have done so. You've led a full life and this reads well.


 Comment Written 19-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
    Thanks much for your kind words.
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Very interesting life. Curious on what more you had to say. That's a lot of children, lol! You have seen lot! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing a part of you:)


 Comment Written 19-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
    Thanks much for your kind words.
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To have traveled and seen the world is a blessing. And apparently, you're a very strong lady too. Family everywhere that loves you. I can't even imagine the holiday parties. May life only be a string of good tidings :)


 Comment Written 18-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 18-Oct-2019
    Thanks so much for the nice review.
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