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Rey


So loved, will be so missed

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Sandra Ludwick
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your story. I found it to be heartbreaking. I can't imagine having to make a decision like that, but I understand your wife has to come first.


 Comment Written 24-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
    Sandra, thank you for reading and commenting on Rey. Life is seldom an easy thing to live with "best plans". But, we adapt and move forward.
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So very sorry about the accident. My heart goes out to your wife and to Rey. I hope she's on the mend and that Rey has found another great family.

From the picture Rey is indeed a beautiful creature.

Good luck in the contest.

Blessings Julia


 Comment Written 24-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
    Julia, I will share your kind and compassionate words with my wife. I delight that I will be getting her home next week and continue with a long rehab schedule, so all will be made right again. We are very close to getting Rey Into a new home that will be good for all concerned.

reply by juliaSjames on 24-Oct-2019
    That's good news. God is in control.

    JJ
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"Rey'
Was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
E,
Doctor Ricky 1024


 Comment Written 22-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
    Thank you for reviewing and commenting on my work.
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He looks like a friendly dog. So sorry to hear about your wife. I like your story. His name is good for a dog. Good luck in the contest! No grammatical errors.


 Comment Written 21-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
    Thanks Raul.
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Oh my God,
this story just had me in tears. This must be so hard for you. Our pets become part of the family and to lose one is like loosing a child. I wish I could take her and love her as you have, but I am so far away. I hope she finds a new home that will love her as you have. Good luck.
Brenda.x


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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
    Brenda, yes it is difficult! But we move ahead. Thanks for reviewing and commenting on my poem
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oh goodness, where do you live? My puppy dog here isn't so good lately. I loved reading your story. We have always loved and had labs. I hope that your wife didn't have to have another bout of surgery. So sorry this happen.


 Comment Written 21-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
    Rosemary, we live near Asheville, NC. I believe we are done with operations...yeah! Thanks for reviewing and commenting on my poem.

reply by Rosemary Everson1 on 21-Oct-2019
    did you find a home for your dog?
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What a sad ending to a beautiful relationship. Labradors have the most wonderful temperaments. I'm sure Rey will make an ideal therapy dog.

Just one glitch: and heafty fifty-five pounds - spelling - hefty.

Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 21-Oct-2019



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    Thank you silly me...fixed lol
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Very sorry for your loss. You told a good story. It appeared that Rev was a gentle dog who filled your life with pleasant memories. I also hope your wife recovered from her injury. Wishing you the best.


 Comment Written 21-Oct-2019



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    Thank,you.
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Very sorry for your loss. You told a good story. It appeared that Rev was a gentle dog who filled your life with pleasant memories. I also hope your wife recovered from her injury. Wishing you the best.


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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
    Thank you.
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This story, Rey, is very upbeat for almost its entirety. The clash at the end and ouster of the animal seemed almost unrelated to the rest of the story. Hope the hip is okay.


 Comment Written 21-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
    Bill, thanks
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