Powerful words you write. We are moving or perhaps have already moved into a darker period of history. I am troubled by what I see and hear. There is blame enough to spread to all and still I think (maybe hope) that there is still time to turn things around. Perhaps we need to slow down, listen to each other, work to reduce our hate and blame and find compassion for others. You are probably aware there are a couple of spelling or typing errors in the piece. "bBabies" and "Will Eaths woes..." Nicely done, Go well.
"The Earth spun not an the Angels cried."
"The Earth spun and now the Angels cried."
Hi, your writing was interesting. These are some of the suggestions:
"Flowers died, bBabies cried and addicts tried."
"Flowers died, Babies cried and addicts tried."
"Will Sin and Evil win or do we have still a chance?"
"Will Sin and Evil win or do we still have a chance?"
"Will Eaths woes dissapate and disperse or will the Sun and Moon shed more Gloom?"
"Will Earth's woes dissapate and disperse or will the Sun and Moon shed more Gloom?"
This short piece poses the question of what will become of planet earth. Although the ancient times discussed are pre-politics the modern reader can't help but think of how the way we are abusing our planet could cause our destruction. Well done.