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A struggling soul

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dejohnsrld (Debbie)
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This is a very honest and touching spiritual poem, my friend. We all have down times--it is the end result that counts. We are all imperfect~Debbie


 Comment Written 20-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
    Thanks for your reply
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Y. M. Roger
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You are so right -- the road up eternity's rise is rife with 'switchbacks' where we do not seem to be moving in the direction we desire....and, of course, it is our own fault. A wonderful expression in abab rhyme scheme of one of those times we feel we are not 'making progress'... Thanx for sharing! ;)


 Comment Written 20-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
    Ups and downs all around.
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