-I appreciate your note, jaybird.
-A well written poem about fear.
-I like this line:
"We fear the storms of nature's wrath"
-You effectively go from
fear to "lifes precious gift"
and a very good concluding couplet
with very good advice.
-Thanks for sharing.
Words of wisdom here - to be crippled by fear is no way to live life. Even if we are somewhat disabled at this point in a physical way, we can still glean some enjoyment. It's what we choose to focus on that will determine our quality of life. Thank you for sharing your insights.
I really enjoyed reading your poem, it's full of great advice. As we age fear becomes a big part of our everyday life. As you said, worrying about what will happen if we become sick or disabled is a big burden.