A Broken Heart Won't Kill Ya
[Meant to be sung, folks - not precise meter...]
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One day at a time

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harmony13
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The author's word were clear, interesting, creative and gave good advise.
I really liked the last stanza - it really said for me "let go and live each
day". Thank you.... The poem flows and connects well.


 Comment Written 21-Oct-2019


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another great poem. Which is more important health or wealth? I can honestly say that if we didn't have our health there wouldn't be any wealth.
Keep up the great writing.


 Comment Written 21-Oct-2019


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Taking things day by day is a good way to live. We all get new aches and pains as we age and we shouldn't let that worry us. Nicely written
sonnet.
Keep writing
Joan


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Living in fear does not add even a moment to your life so why waste precious time? Even if you die tomorrow living in fear today gains you nothing. Very well written.


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I agree with you there my friend. Live life to the full, get out and enjoy it, experience it and embrace all that it has to offer. None of us no when our time will be up so live every day like it could be your last and you will have an awesome ride : ))


 Comment Written 21-Oct-2019


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I enjoyed your poem, Jay. It has an excellent message that is so true. So many waste time of what could be (fears) that life passes them by. Great flow and rhyme. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan


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A very well-written heartfelt poem about fear that takes our joy of life away. We should live each day with faith an expectation of everything good and wholesome will come our way.


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This solidly rhymed poem presents a valid universal message with great
wisdom, no visual required. I can personally relate to it.
Very well penned and appreciated.


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Another skillfully-written, wise, moving poem, Jaybird. Yes, there is much in life that can make us fearful, especially as we age. Most of them are beyond our control. We must pray--and live.


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This is a poem with a powerful message, written with a beautiful flow and rhythm, casting its pearls of wisdom like confetti in every stanza. The choice of words and rhyme marks the author as an experienced writer and well-read reader. It has a style that I feel is profound in its simplicity and clarity, leaving the reader with a positive road to follow at its end. Thank you! Well written.


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