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Romantic Dinner


My idea of a romantic dinner

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Raffaelina Lowcock
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You bet! The cocktails are provoking amiable conversation that leads to intimacy that leads to kisses that leads to... whatever! Perfect. The picture is like the cream at the top.


 Comment Written 22-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
    Thanks for the delightful review!
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the13thpoet
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Good Tuesday morning. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed the 2-4-2 form of poem quite well. Good job and good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 22-Oct-2019



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    Thanks so much!
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This is something I'm sure most people aspire to when they dine out, or even dine in for that matter. I like the image you've selected to accompany this.

Wishing you the best of luck with the contest judging committee {smiles}.


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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
    Thank you very much!
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"Romantic Dinner is a 2-4-2 Poetry Contest Entry'
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
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Good luck with this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky 1024


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    Thank you so much for your wonderful review!
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This sounds like a fun and romantic evening, full of fun and a connection made here that could lead to a passionate night, I read all this in just three words, magical, love Dolly x


 Comment Written 22-Oct-2019



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    Thanks so very much for your sweet review. Here's to magic for you!
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Great use of alliteration (consonance) in this very short poem, my friend. It sounds like a wonderful night. Best wishes in the contest~Debbie


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    What a nice review! Thank you so much!
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Yep. You've summed it up. A perfect romantic dinner. This is a great 2-4-2 poem which should do well in the competition.
I love your artworm and presentation. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.


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    Thank you for your wonderful review and stars! Glad you liked it.
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It does sound romantic and I like your alliteration of hard 'c' sounds for each line. 'Kisses' has that sound, too! Linguists call it an voiceless velar consonant. Ooops, spoiled the romantic moment!
Best wishes in the contest!


 Comment Written 22-Oct-2019



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    Hahaha! Thanks so much, and you did not spoil a romantic moment! Who knows, two linguists could enjoy a romantic dinner, their conversation being the thrills of linguistics!
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