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2019 part 4


Viewing comments for Chapter 96 "Prelude to a Scream"

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"Prelude to a Scream'
Is a "5-7-5 Horror Contest Entry"
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
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Good luck with this and have a great Evening.
Ricky


 Comment Written 23-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
    Thank you kind sir
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Ha, I am quite enjoying all these horror shorts. Nothing like some blazing eyes and fangs in the dark to get a person all skeered.

Great job Barb and good luck with the Committee. :)

Gloria


 Comment Written 23-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
    You are so right and thank you
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Barb, You did a great job on this 5-7-5 Horror poem for the contest. You used very good descriptive and down right scary words with scary art work. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri


 Comment Written 22-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
    Thank you, this always scares me in movies
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I absolutely, totally hate being scared. I've been know to stop watching a movie half way through because I didn't like the feeling of being scared. The title of your poem drew me in, and the poem actually scared me...not my favorite feeling. Great job with this 5-7-5 horror poem.


 Comment Written 22-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
    I put my hands up in front of my face. LOL Thank you

reply by Sasha on 24-Oct-2019
    That doesn't work for me. I go to google to see how the movie ends before deciding to watch it all the way through.
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Good heavens! I'm glad I read this now and not at nighttime. These are the scariest two sentences I've read in a while. I hope you didn't get nightmares from it.


 Comment Written 22-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
    These always scare me.I put my hands up in front of my face. LOL Thank you
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I like this. The title made me really curious to see what the poem would be about and what was leading up to the scream. The picture is interesting too.


 Comment Written 22-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
    Thank you for your encouraging review
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Hi Barb,
I don't usually review these short poems but this one made me gasp.
How awful, I would have died on the spot. So much angst in such few words.
You pulled it off.
Brenda.x


 Comment Written 22-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
    You truly made my day and I thank you so much
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This is a perfect entry, Barb. It's frightful for sure and leaves the reader much to worry about.
The only thing that I would suggest would be to make the presentation more frightful. Use a dark background, crazy font, and blazing font color. You want to make a scary first impression.
Good luck in the contest. This should do well.


 Comment Written 22-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
    I truly appreciate the advice and I wish I knew how to do it because I see others entrys to contests and they stand out. Thank you very much for the encouraging reivew

reply by Debbie Pope on 22-Oct-2019
    I'll be happy to walk you through it if you like.
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-That is quite a piece
of artwork, Barb!
-The syllable count and
imagery are good.
-You have definitely
created a good Halloween demon!
-If that isn't scary enough;
the lights went out, too!
-A good Halloween poem;
good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 22-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
    Thank you, seems that is the scariest part to me

reply by Pam (respa) on 22-Oct-2019
    You are welcome, and I agree, but put both together, that's really scary!
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