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Azreal


A poem in nine parts

  21 total reviews 
Comment by
chihuahua
 
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Rating of Chapter 1 -
Chapter One
This was quite well done, and not like one would be if found in Hell. Your poem has rhythm and style, This poem will be recalled for more than a month. Paul


 Comment Written 13-Oct-2005


Comment by
aefyr
 
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Rating of Chapter 5 -
Chapter Five
This is far better than your previous chapter. There is only one question mark typo here and that is early in the poem. Once again great, tight rhymes and logical, clear progression. Nice work.


 Comment Written 15-Aug-2005


Comment by
aefyr
 
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Rating of Chapter 1 -
Chapter One
This is a very good poem for the most part. It flows well and contains a logical progression and a strong ending. I was distracted by the question marks used in place of apostrophes. Also you wrote "no" instead of "know". I also have a question mark as to whether the title should be spelt "Azrael" instead of "Azreal". However, it is your poem so your choice.


 Comment Written 15-Aug-2005


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Theseus
 
 
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Chapter One
I really like this poem it has a very good use of vocabullary and is a bit puzzling but I guess I wil just find out in the next part


 Comment Written 22-May-2005


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Charley
 
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Rating of Chapter 2 -
Chapter Two
good writing a bit boring but good grammer and spelling and meter


 Comment Written 10-Aug-2003


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Charley
 
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Chapter Eight
good writing good grammer good spelling no typos no problems


 Comment Written 10-Aug-2003


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LordRhino
 
 
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Rating of Chapter 1 -
Chapter One
The rhymes fit, where they should, the images show cruelty as you wanted. Best of all it doesn't seem to have any mistakes. Good work with this one. The point of view also is a nice touch, as it is like laying a curse on you.


 Comment Written 27-Jul-2003


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GreenEyes
 
 
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Rating of Chapter 1 -
Chapter One
This read very well up until the first sentance of the last stanza. I kind of skipped on the no/know in it. Well written.


 Comment Written 26-Jul-2003


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Lynne
 
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Rating of Chapter 1 -
Chapter One
Excellent work, James! "My name? My friend I no more know, Its use was peeled from off my soul" Great line!


 Comment Written 26-Jul-2003


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Fencetennis
 
 
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Rating of Chapter 9 -
Chapter Nine
Oh now I understand. Azreal was a high ranked angel. Great poem book. I loved it.


 Comment Written 26-Jul-2003


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