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The Poetic Diary - Entry 8


Some of my daily thoughts in poetic form

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This is a very well written poem you have penned in your poetic diary. It is so true we can't get back any time that is spent and gone. You used very good words that are very true my friend. Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Teri


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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
    You are welcome, and thank you for taking the time to review it.
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I enjoy this little poems very much. They are easy to understand and remind us of things that we know but that we often forget in our hectic lives.
Thanks so much for sharing.


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    Thank you, glad you enjoyed it!
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This is so true and we all try to adhere to living in the moment. But, we don't always succeed. It is good the be spurred on and reminded of the value of time. Thank you for sharing.


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Absolutely absolute as I tell my kids. This is a message I have tried to tell my daughters for years now and you have done it so very well. Gone is gone


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Another beautiful and thoughtful musing from your journal. You were very wise at a young age, dear poet.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :))


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You start this poem with a well known proverb, but you finish it with the stark reality: once time has passed by
You can never get it back.
Too true {smiles}.

I'm enjoying reading this series of posts {thumbs up}.


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I like the inclusion of common phrases/ideas in this piece. You have presented familiar wisdom in an altered format that flows well and speaks to a clear message. =)


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I love the idea of putting daily thoughts in verse. I used to do that for my children. I felt like I had so much inspiring to do. And often, my daily notes were in verse. I was the one that was inspired back then. I thought about what was important and passed it on. I wrote it in huge verse and taped it to their bathroom mirrors. They had to at least look at it to take it down so they could get ready. My kids laugh about it today. It was definitely a good thing though. You keep up your wonderful advice, and thank you for sharing with me.


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Another fine poem, Roddy, and some great advice--I'm living proof of how fast your whole life can change. One car wreck, one coma, and wallah, instant change!


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Oh were truer words not ever spoken! A wonderfully rhythmic statement of mantra that everyone should carry with them everyday!! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;)

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