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The Poetic Diary - Entry 10


Some of my daily thoughts in poetic form

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moonsunrise
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I really enjoyed reading from your poetic diary. Such a positive, encouraging poem. What a great idea you had!
Thanks very much for sharing.
Have a wonderful week!


 Comment Written 29-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
    Thank you, glad you enjoyed it!
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I'm going to make just one comment on the set of poems that you have entered as diary installments. Kudos my brother. Thank you so much for sharing. This is just what my poor discouraged and somewhat bewildered heart needed to hear today. I sign this with tears of gratitude. I appreciate this. Well Done!


 Comment Written 26-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
    WOW! Thank you for another gracious review. I am so humbled and honored that my thoughts and words could touch someone and make a difference in their life even if only for a day. Thanks again.

reply by Brenda Henderson on 03-Dec-2019
    You're very welcome!
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Easier said than done sometimes. Jesus said "anxiety is sufficient for the day thereof, tomorrow will take care of itself." I'm going through a rough time at present, my partner died in the kitchen on the first of this month. Weekends are hitting me hard. I know I will rise again, the Lord is beside me, waiting. Well done poet.


 Comment Written 26-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
    Thank you again for your time and review.
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I like this. It's so encouraging. Every day we can start anew and there's always the posibility of realizing our dreams.
Perfect artwork as well.
Thanks so much for sharing.


 Comment Written 25-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
    Thank you Maria, glad you enjoyed it!
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This is another very nice poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and I love this art work you chose. I think our future is being written every day by the help and grace of God. Thank you for sharing. Blessings, Teri


 Comment Written 25-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
    Thank you!
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You have three 'and' so I would break it up and use But for the second one, it still makes it flow and adds the thought another way. Very nicely stated


 Comment Written 25-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
    Thanks for the review and advice my friend.
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I like this hopeful poem about making the most of the day and pressing on into the future with hope and new goals. how did you come up with your interesting name as a writer?
Bill


 Comment Written 25-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
    Thank you, glad you enjoyed it!
    The short answer:
    I was born on the 13th day of a month and I'm a poet.
    The more complex answer:
    The number 13 has always been important to me. Not only is my bday June 13th but so is my mother and father. In addition I grew up in the ghetto of Newark, NJ I lived in a high project building on the 13th floor. Well it was the 14th floor but since they decided to skip 13 it was in actually the 13th floor. I never fell into the stigma of 13 being a bad luck number even though one year when my bday fell on Friday the 13th I got beat up. LOL. Well enough of my ranting, I hope that answered your question my friend.

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Well, if there's a way to start the day off with the right attitude, you certainly have found it!! ;) A wonderful a?a?a?a? offering to get us smiling and motivated! ;)


 Comment Written 25-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
    Thank you, glad you enjoyed it!
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You have expressed some very positive thoughts here and your poem inspires the reader to continue striving to reach his/her goals and dreams. Thanks for sharing.


 Comment Written 25-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
    Thank you, glad you enjoyed it!
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I like the sense of energetic encouragement in this exhortation to lead a life moving on positively from difficult times. Our future is indeed in our own hands to make of it what we will, so it might as well be one that is worth living.
It's a good idea to write your thoughts down, and a poetic diary will keep you thinking and finding ideas to express.


 Comment Written 25-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
    Yes they will, thanks again LisaMay. Have a great day!
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