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The Poetic Diary - Entry 11


Some of my daily thoughts in poetic form

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dragonpoet
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Interesting artwork used to illustratate what I fell is a description of the way a parent feels about his/her child growing up. Maybe after high school graduation.
Congrats on placing second in the contest
Keep writng
dragonpoet


 Comment Written 01-Dec-2019



reply by the author on 04-Dec-2019
    Thanks on the contest win and thank you for your time and review, much appreciated!

reply by dragonpoet on 04-Dec-2019
    You're welcome on all accounts.
    dp
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judester
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Me again. I just want to congratulate you on the double win this week.
Bravo, you must be proud.. I am for you,
cheers, judester


 Comment Written 07-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
    Thank you, at first I didn't know what you were talking about, I had no idea that my other poem won 2nd place in contest of the month. I am proud and honored.
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This is beautifully penned, my friend. It is so full of wisdom and good wishes for the reader. I look forward to reading more of your diary, my friend~Debbie


 Comment Written 28-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
    Thank you Debbie, glad you enjoyed it!
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Janice Canerdy
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What a wonderful, uplifting poem! It is full of the best wishes we could have for others. God help those who take more than they give and never learn from their mistakes!


 Comment Written 28-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
    Thank you, glad you enjoyed it!
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Michele Harber
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This is a lovely, optimistic and encouraging poem, very reminiscent of Lee Ann Womack's song "I Hope You Dance." I love the positive images, and the idea that, even as we age, there are still things that we can do to enjoy and appreciate life and, as you say, live it "to the fullest."

My only problem is that your third line throws the otherwise smooth pace off a bit. You might want to try, "As we race towards the future." It keeps your idea of "quickly head[ing] for the future," but reads a bit more smoothly. I hope this is helpful. Have a wonderful day.


 Comment Written 28-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
    Thank you for your time, review and advice, glad you enjoyed it!

reply by Michele Harber on 07-Nov-2019
    You're very welcome, and congratulations! I was so happy to see your poem nominated, and thrilled that you tied for second.
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This lovely poem says so much and is crafted well. It shows how pensive and pondering you are and gives others a boost for their daily lives.


 Comment Written 28-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
    Thank you for your gracious review, glad you enjoyed it!
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Your poem reflects clearly, we have some responsibility to give back or pay it forward in life. You are wise to share these words for others to read; it is not a free ride in this life!


 Comment Written 28-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
    Thank you JLR, glad you enjoyed it my friend!
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Barb Henson
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You have put so much into this wonderfully done rhyming piece of thoughtfulness and caring. Very nicely done in rhyme and flow and content. A nice addition


 Comment Written 28-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
    Thank you again for another gracious, glad you enjoyed it!
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I love this one in particular. The line, "give more than you take" is really the key to happiness. I try to improve my surrounding with this philosophy. Thank you for sharing your deep poetry.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :)


 Comment Written 28-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
    Thanks again Sally, glad you enjoyed it!
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This is a very nice and well written poem you have penned about life and not letting it pass us by. We do need to enjoy our life so we won't have regrets. You used very good descriptive words that seemed to come from your heart. Blessings, Teri

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 Comment Written 28-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
    Thank you again Teri, glad you enjoyed it!
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