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The Poetic Diary - Entry 13


What scares us all

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juliaSjames
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Ah time. It just runs through that hourglass without us noticing.

I enjoyed this well written poem, laid back and unassuming, yet packing a punch.

A poetic diary sounds awesome. Are you still doing it?

Blessings Julia


 Comment Written 07-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
    Yes I am. Thank you, glad you enjoyed it!
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This is such a meaningful poem. Time is everything when it comes to a writer. I love writing. I have been writing several years, too. I have to read your other poems; are they on your profile? Good luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 07-Nov-2019



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    Thank you, glad you enjoyed it!
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Congratulations on this meaningful piece. I fear I wasn't very wise (or lucky?) when I was younger and wasted a lot of time in grief and despair. Hoping this'll gradually ease off; as the older I get, the more control over my life I have.


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    Thank you, glad you enjoyed it!
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Your well chosen words contain the important message you sum up in your final sentence. The acrostic is apt and serves as a reminder that we're all finite. Wonderfully written commentary... ...ec


 Comment Written 07-Nov-2019



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    Thank you, glad you enjoyed it!

reply by Elaine Chiodi on 07-Nov-2019
    You're welcome... ...ec
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This is the one thing we are all allotted each day and it is our choice how we will use it. Will we make it productive or will we waste the minute and hours?
Patricia


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    Thanks for your time and review.
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Entry thirteen on Halloween! Don't waste a minute of the day on foolish things. We live in a world of conflict, greed and hate. "Anxiety is sufficient for the day thereof," says the Lord. Tomorrow will take care of itself." You are getting your message of Time across, some have blinders on, I don't. Cheers friend.


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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
    Thank you for your time and gracious review, glad you enjoyed it!
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Yes, time certainly is a precious commodity--more precious than gold,
prestige . . . you name it. Each person should develop a sense of knowing when he/she is wasting time.


 Comment Written 30-Oct-2019



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    Thank you for your time and review.
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Another fine poem, Roddy, and I'm living (barely made it) of how fast it can change or be over--one minute I'm driving, listening to the radio, the next I'm waking up (barely) in the hospital, and still fighting to get back where I was


 Comment Written 30-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
    Thank you my friend. I know you may still be trying to get back where you were, but I'm sure that incident put things in a totally different perspective for you. I don't know where were, or who you were then, but at least you're here now and they slightly off guy you are now doesn't seem too bad. LOL Have a good one my friend.

reply by Mike Stevens on 07-Nov-2019
    Thanks, Roddy, and did I really whine that? I HATE whining about my problems, forget what I said
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I really appreciate the sentiment of this poem. I think that the acrostic form works well for the top portion of your poem - however I think that having half of your poem be acrostic and the other half not breaks the flow/cohesion. I like both sections, I just think that they would be stronger as separate poems.


 Comment Written 30-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
    Thank you for your time, review, and insight. Much appreciated!
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What an upbeat and wonderfully inspiring offering for the morning (or any TIME, for that matter!) -- like the mixture of acrostic and encouragement! ;) :) Thanx for sharing! ;)


 Comment Written 30-Oct-2019



reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
    Thank you, glad you enjoyed it!
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