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Julius Caesar Act 1 Scene 2

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You are a crazy man -- and so very talented to pull this one off, Sir Bill!! ;) :) So, tell me, do you need to glance back at the list every now and then to be sure you keep the comments to the right person...? :) :) :) :)
Sorry, playing catch up again.... and I'm thinking catch up might be impossible, but I've got a few hours breathe today, so gonna give it the good ol' American try - LOL! ;) Yvette


 Comment Written 04-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
    Thank you, Yvette, for the kind review. Bill

reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
    Thank you, Yvette, for the kind review. Bill
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Hahahaha, Bill. Your sense of humour is out of this world. Yes, I can well believe it!! This is crazy humour at its best. Cant wait to be reading on. Ulla:)))


 Comment Written 02-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
    Thank you, Ulla, for the positive review. Bill
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It's definitely a much funnier version of the scene!
I have noticed a marked change in your writing, with you placing yourself as a character in the scenes. It definitely changes the tone of the scene, and I was wondering if this change helps you get inside your character's heads better.


 Comment Written 02-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
    For these scene sequences I have three pairs of characters: Pons and Ned, who are basically an every guy and a not-so-bright one; Pez and Pallas, brothers separated by twenty years and tend to be a bit dark; and Matt and Jiffy, who are a brainy guy and his antisocial, here-for-the-beer buddy.

    I have thrown them together here to assure that I am defining their individual personas so that they don't seem like the same people.

reply by brenda faye curtis on 02-Nov-2019
    I see. It can be a good way to further develop the characters.
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Bill, This is a very cute script you have penned with the funny guys. I don't know how you write this and keep it where you can understand what to say next. This is very cute and well written my friend! Blessings, Teri


 Comment Written 01-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
    Thanks, Teri
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Getting to the end of the year, aren't we? Pity the poor directors. They have to work with the talent that's available. Pons has to show off by mentioning the Calpurnia is the name of the housekeeper in "To Kill a Mockingbird," but this isn't the time to show off. Of course Ned has difficulty. Doesn't know what he's supposed to say. Funny that he says seizure for Caesar. He and Jiffy will have a lot in common. The director will be tearing his hair out presently. Humorous and a clever idea. judi


 Comment Written 01-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
    Thanks, Judi. I?m trying keep them worth reading and not get into a race.

reply by judiverse on 01-Nov-2019
    You're welcome. This is a clever idea. judi
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I think the idea is really a clever one, just not too sure these are the right guys for the speaking parts. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.


 Comment Written 01-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
    These guys are definitely not the right choices; however...
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They will never pull of this play. Julie S. Seizure is rolling in his grave. lol.

Sometimes, I think Ned has had a lobotomy. lol

Very funny.


 Comment Written 01-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
    Thank you, Yvonne. They will try again though.
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Methinks this drama is headed for a 9-11 call. Isn't that what usually happens after a train wreck? Whose bright idea was it to cast a serious Roman drama with a bunch of clowns anyway? Please tell me it wasn't you Bill. I would think that by this time you would have known better. LOL.


 Comment Written 01-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
    Production costs dictated that the cast be amateurs who bring a sack lunch.

reply by nomi338 on 01-Nov-2019
    You put the 'bud' in low budget. LOL.
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Mission scripture about Julius Caesar was well-written rich and theme and imagery read well flowed well and know grammar issues as well descriptive measures aligned perfectly good luck with this have a blessed day doctor Ricky 1024


 Comment Written 01-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
    Thanks, Ricky
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Love the way they go back and fourth with their unknown humor, great characters these two and I think this could go a lot further, very well written****kahpot


 Comment Written 01-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
    Thanks, kahpot. I?ll give them a couple more shots at it.
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