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Julie S. Seizure Act 1 Scene 2

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LOL!! Do you still have hair left up there, Sir Bill!! ;) :) I would just love to see this on the small stage -- would just be wonderfully entertaining... (Mr. Bebopolis? lol!)... ;) :)
Sorry, still playing catch up .... and I'm thinking it might be impossible, but I'm making a LITTLE headway (shhhh, don't disagree!) - LOL! ;) Yvette


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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
    I certainly appreciate your extra efforts to look at my stuff, Yvette. When I get way behind I have to pare down to those, like you, who I really want to read.
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And confusions reigns, I like the way you decipher the words as the different characters try to understand, as their confusions sets the whole play off track-or out the building, very well written****kahpot


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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
    Thank you, kahpot.
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I don't now Bill. This is starting to resemble that cluster of screw ups. I know you know what I'm talking about.I am beginning to wonder who really knows what's going on. who is keeping score?


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    I was hoping you were, nomi.

reply by nomi338 on 02-Nov-2019
    The you obviously have a higher opinion of me that I do of myself.
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Lol! Now Mr. Bebopolis has to be Bill? I had such high hopes for him. Poor Ned, always the butt of jokes but he's such a good sport and never seems to take it personally.


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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
    I think Mr. Bebopolis got the best part.
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Ned still insists on saying "soothsayer" instead of his line. He and Jiffy are quite a pair. They would drive any director crazy. Fun bit about the Ned thinking Caesar is using a phone and the reference to the roamin' fees is great. Sounds like Bill is trying to get rid of Ned. Wonder why? Pallas is missing (I hope you'll bring him back). The custodian is funny, though, the way he misreads his lines.
Pons, of course, is on top of his lines. Yeah, they'll just have to make it up as they go along. judi


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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
    Thanks, Judi, for giving this a look and for the excellent review. Bill

reply by judiverse on 02-Nov-2019
    You're very welcome. I was in a production of Richard III many, many years ago. I could not begin to memorize those lines now. judi
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If you are making it up as you go along, I have to say it's going really well. I have often found that some of the best stories and poems come off the top of my head, and it's best if I have no idea where it's going until it arrives.


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    That does sometimes serve when inspiration is at a slow drip.

reply by brenda faye curtis on 04-Nov-2019
    So true!
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Haaaa, this is so quirky as to be brilliant, Bill. De roman fees for de phone are superb.

You got class and with Shake Spears you cannot go wrong.

Terrific script!

Gloria


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    Thanks so much, Gloria. These guys are a handful.
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An entertaining previous chapter summary. A very Interesting and entertaining characters and conversation. You have done well, please keep up the great work.


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    Thank you, beizanten
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Boy these boys are good at mucking up a script, as if there wasn't one around that Shakespeare had, just loved this, these not bright are a Hoot Bill, they might not make it to broadway or the movies, but that certainly entertain me. Well done, blessings, Roy

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 Comment Written 01-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
    Thanks, Roy, for the kind review. Bill
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LOL! I lovvve it! Utter confusion. A real masterpiece... you've outdone yourself this time. Ned is terrific, and I love how the janitor has to play the part of Bill. LOL!


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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2019
    Thank you, Phyllis. I love it when you love it. Bill
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