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Julia Seizure Act 1 Scene 2.2

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nomi338
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As this train rambles down the track, my fear of an impending wreck has me looking over my shoulder. "Beware the Ides of March!", keep intruding on my conscious mind.


 Comment Written 11-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 11-Nov-2019
    I think I?ll jump to the credits and let this lie. I came not to praise CAESAR, but to bury him.
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Well, I'll never be able to watch Julius Caesar with a straight face again (probably don't want to - as the last one I saw put the play with corpses hanging from the ceiling and Nazi garbed players.)
Keep going with all these scripts, Bill!


 Comment Written 09-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 09-Nov-2019
    I?m flagged as a rank climber and it hurts my feelings a bit. I saw the front runner was gaming the system so I figured I?d blank him out. Now I?m apparently the gamer.

reply by lyenochka on 09-Nov-2019
    I'm cheering for you and Judi! Both of you write actual scripts with stories, review and promote - actually, play the FS game the way we're supposed to!
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Really confusing with all the name changes, but I got the gist of it. I wonder if they'll kill Ceasar, as they did in reality and in the play. That should be interesting, in that humor and murder don't really mix well. Good luck. :)


 Comment Written 09-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 09-Nov-2019
    I?m losing interest in this bit, Phyllis. I enjoy th3 difficulty in the speaking parts, but I now doubt anyone really cares much about that. I was reading this to my son earlier, he?s my biggest fan. He winced at trying to follow along as did my wife.

reply by Phyllis Stewart on 09-Nov-2019
    They are your best critics, then. Take their advice. :)
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You know your reason. Your trying to catch that guy with the 8-line scripts. You may just do it. This attempt at performing Julius Caesar is more of a farce. The names get confused, and I don't know how Hazel got introduced into it. Great line about Caesar likely to be made kind when Jootus says, "Not on my watch, Dude." The director needs to find a catalog of easy to perform plays for high school students. Maybe they could handle one of them. judi


 Comment Written 09-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 09-Nov-2019
    I?m not sure if this is a good review or if you?re telling me my script stinks. I might be racing to the top of the script list, but I figured that was why there was a list. I write to entertain myself. I was number two on this list last year without even trying. Seems there are a lot of folks crowding the top now, so ? yeah.

reply by judiverse on 09-Nov-2019
    True, there aren't many script writers. I'm not criticizing your script, just wondering why the flurry of activity so suddenly? judi
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Press on ... press on! This is a well penned script which adheres to the rules of the form splendidly throughout. The dialog moves along at a jaunty pace. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.


 Comment Written 09-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 09-Nov-2019
    Thank you, MA
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Your script is well-written, interesting, very realistic. Especially the little squabble between your characters. I imagine that would drive the director mad. Nice job.


 Comment Written 09-Nov-2019



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    Thanks, MD
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