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The Poetic Diary - Entry 16


Some of my daily thoughts in poetic form

  5 total reviews 
Comment by
Brenda Henderson
 
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Okay My Brother. All I can say is Thanks again. I'm certain that this will be much needed encouragement for many of your readers. If one can maintain a hopeful and positive outlook on life and keep their faith in love then they are definitely winning! Well Done!


 Comment Written 05-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
    Thank you my friend, glad you enjoyed it! And thanks for the gracious review.

reply by Brenda Henderson on 06-Nov-2019
    You're very welcome!
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Barb Hensongispsaca
Barb Henson
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ON the lighter side, those that know me know I have been married three times, and all disasters, but still you are right, the love of my life was killed in the Vietnam war,
Nicely done with good rhyme


 Comment Written 04-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
    Thanks again my friend. I'm sorry to hear that. At least you know who the love of your life was. Still looking for mine.
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peculiar2011
 
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Beautiful poem. I can definitely relate to it. The first four lines are the best, they stopped me in my tracks. You took the words right out of my mouth. I'm waiting on "a matter of time"


 Comment Written 04-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
    Thanks again!
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Pantygynt
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This is a skilfully written poem that uses slant rhyme to the full. It is in effect tha either just doesn't rhyme or nearly does. The slants are brilliantly contrived. And because they just don't make a full rhyme the poet never quites find the true love for which he searches. If he had done so the whole effect would have been ruined by a final couplet of full rhyme -- like everybody else's poem. Lol.


 Comment Written 04-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
    Thank you my friend, glad you enjoyed it!
Comment by
Sally Law
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Yes, she or he is out there. I'm amazed that people shy away from looking though. A shame really. I can't even fathom not being married and having my boatload of kids.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :)


 Comment Written 04-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
    Thank you Sally. Your time and review are always appreciated.
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