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Scene at a Pink-skied Planet 2

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Hey Bill, I don't know what you have been smoking, but I feel like I just inhaled a giant Doobie, just from reading these episodes. That is a contact high like none I have ever experienced before, ever.


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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2019
    Be sure not to drive any heavy equipment, nomi.
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You deliver a well penned script that adheres to all the rules format and construction nicely. Okay, so these two are apparently suffering some kind of post traumatic astral disaster syndrome flashback right? I think I am beginning to catch on - I'm not the sharpest tool in the shed :). Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.


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    Thanks, MA
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LOL!! More with the crazy pink planet!! ;) :) So this time they are Butches... before they were men... any difference we should note for the next installment...? :) :) And, yeah, I'm pretty sure neither's in their right mind! ;) :) Yvette


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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
    Butches is crazy!
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Interesting. Both are named Butch. LOL! I think I'll call myself Bill2 and you can be Bill1. Imagination can take you anywhere, as our Butches have just proven. Good job. :)


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    Thanks, Phyllis. Or should I say, Thanks, Bill2.
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Lol! I think you've written a sci-fi version of "Waiting for Godot." I like your word play of "imagining us home" which is taken both ways.

"and it's hide." (its)


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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
    You know, of course, the stinking iPhone changes the spelling to the homonym just to make me look bad.

reply by lyenochka on 04-Nov-2019
    Lol! I think that should be your next script. Bill vs. iPhone's Autocorrect. I know a gal named Naila and when I type her name Android changes it to Nails.
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