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Scene at a Pink-skied Planet 3

a one scene script

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This is well penned and adheres nicely to script structure and form. It moves along at a good pace. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.


 Comment Written 08-Nov-2019



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    Thank you, MA.
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This was an adorable story. I attribute that to your character names. Funny Bunny and Commander Banana... cute, completely. You're very creative. Well thought out. Clearly written. Good narration mixed with dialogue. Nice work :)


 Comment Written 07-Nov-2019



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    Thank you, sunnilicious.
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My head is still spinning from these characters and their situation but it has a weird fascination that draws me to read on just to see how mad it can get!


 Comment Written 07-Nov-2019



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    Step into the light of the pink-skied sun, Sallyo.

reply by Sallyo on 07-Nov-2019
    Now you're being CREEPy.

reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
    Sorry. I?ve one last scene for this bit and it will be concluded.
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The saga continues. This time it's a mystery and a sci-fi and hopefully, no more beings will be killed but somehow, I think the Spud maybe used for more than rabbit ears.


 Comment Written 07-Nov-2019



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    Potato doesn?t like the name Spud. Must have a chip on his shoulder.
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Right about now I feel that I should be searching for the exit door to get the heck out of this obvious nightmare I am currently trapped in. Help! Someone please help.


 Comment Written 06-Nov-2019



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    Thanks for surviving this, nomi.
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You have got to lay off the caffeine, Bill.... and what was the main ingredient in those cookies your wife gave you yesterday...? :) :) LOL! And, yeah, I can keep track of it once I get into the reading, but you have got to be imbibing to write this stuff..!! ;):) Whatever it is, keep it comin' -- love it!! ;) :) Yvette


 Comment Written 06-Nov-2019



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    CAFFEINE!!!!!
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There definitely is something wrong with HR2. Maybe English is not his native language, being that he's on a planet other than Earth. I think the HR's should get the heck off the pink planet and give the green planet a try. Since they'd be illegal aliens, we'd give them a mansion and a billion dollars ... and free college, of course.


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    I may have to leave the country and return as an alien.

reply by Phyllis Stewart on 06-Nov-2019
    Yes, what a scam! Think of all the benefits you could get, esp if you end up in CA. :)
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