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Amber Waves Of Grain

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Interesting chapter in this story. It left me wanting to read more. Fascinating glimpse into the mind of a young boy. I am not familiar with your story but I found it well written and easy to read. I look forward to reading more.
No errors noted.

Jan


 Comment Written 16-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
    Appreciate your insights and the review.
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This is a well-written story. Very real, believable. I love how you gave a little backstory though out. The ending was suspenseful, nice use of a hook. I look forward to reading more.


 Comment Written 16-Nov-2019



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    Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate your comments and the review.
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I was born and lived my early years in Nebraska. Yes, amber waves of grain. Now I live in Iowa--land of cornfields. A well written story, my friend~Debbie


 Comment Written 16-Nov-2019



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    Glad you enjoyed this post. Spent some time in Omaha, myself. Appreciate the review.
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I liked the story. A lot of stories I read are stilted and too formal. This felt real and I did get caught up in what exactly is going on. Could be a great story to follow.


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    Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate your review.
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This is a good story. I haven't read the first part but it seems you have created some nicely rounded characters here. Thanks for sharing and I look forward to reading the next part.


 Comment Written 13-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 15-Nov-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate the review.
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Hello and a wonderful Wednesday to you Brett. Thank you for sharing your story, it kept me engaged from start to finish. I look forward to reading some more of your story. Good Job.


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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate the review.
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Don't ever forget your roots run deep in her Oglala grasslands." Ogallala.
I noticed that one typo, Bret. I do hope Seth makes it to the store in time to get away from Larsen. Well done. Loved the imagery. Nancy:)


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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate your comments and the review.
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What a great chapter in your book. Will Seth make it to the store or not. All questions to be answered in the next chapter. This story is wonderfully written and I love the picture. Best of luck with your writing!

Have a great day and God bless.
mike


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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate your comments and the review.
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Good read mate. Hope you catch my Swansong poem. I am almost ready to get involved elsewhere. Dressed in her long-sleeved, brightly colored, high-necked floral muumuu, Seth's mother what a big loing detailed description of a dress, hehe.
Did dad say it wrong or typo...Og(a)lala grasslands."


 Comment Written 13-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this posting. Had other members tell me there was too much time between posting chapter one and chapter two. Didn't realize they held me to such a strict clock as far as when I posted something. Haven't taken any action with Feral, but probably will.

reply by Sankey on 13-Nov-2019
    Yeah well nearly ready to Pay him for a year finish here in 2 days. Will still be around here as basic. Feral$40 US per year cheaper than this place.
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Hi Brett, I must admit that it to a wee while to make this click with former episode and then I remembered. Te boy was kidnapped by larsen and the gang. Now what? can he defend himself? Well written. All best. Ulla:))


 Comment Written 12-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this posting. Much appreciate your comments and the review.
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