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Amber Waves Of Grain

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I found the connection between the last episode's and this episode a mite confusing. But I take it Seth is trying to escape from This Larsen cove. Who is waving a gun at him, and I'm wondering whether his real parents are elsewhere, or they the cruel Norman and Eloise, or are others his parents, well done, Brett, good scribing, blessings Roy


 Comment Written 12-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
    Norman and Eloise are Seth's parents. Larsen is the antagonist trying to recapture Seth, who is the protagonist. Hopefully, that clarifies this somewhat. Appreciate your review and comments.

reply by royowen on 13-Nov-2019
    Well done Brett.
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Oh, it took me a while to connect this post to the last one. This was the boy that was kidnapped and abused by Larsen or the mob. Poor kid was abused at home, too. Hope he thinks fast and gets rescued by a truck driver.

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 Comment Written 12-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
    Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate your comments and the review.
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I am totally lost but I take solace in the idea that I am supposed to be. Looks like Larsen's day got better while Seth's slipped back into shitake.

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 Comment Written 12-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
    Seth is being chased by Larsen, the Whitewash leader who is in the process of building "better" boys, and must escape, then figure out how to return to his home in Nebraska....if he survives. Glad you enjoyed this posting. Appreciate the review.
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