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Mystic Angel 7777
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I guess my question would be WHY?? would you want to be number one here since it means pretty much nothing other than you have paid well all year for the honor? I really don't get everyone revving up for the homestretch for pretty much an empty reward. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.


 Comment Written 08-Nov-2019



reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
    It was supposed to be ironic humor. I happen to be close to the top of a rating chart and I thought I?d be funny.
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Lol. I like your self-commentary and how you show us that the means of getting to number one Scriptwriter is to write often. Your humor should keep your rank higher!


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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2019
    Thanks, lyenochka.
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So Bill, what is putrid, you are your writing? Something appears to be toxic. I cannot be that easy to gag one's muse. Mine has the constitution of a hard core veteran soldier who has seen and done it all.


 Comment Written 06-Nov-2019



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    This was a piece that makes a point to certain readers and not to others. Nothing weird or needing interpretation. Thanks for reading.

reply by nomi338 on 06-Nov-2019
    Man oh man Bill, I cannot believe how many typos I made. I hope you could decipher what I was trying to say amid all the errors in typing I made.
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While this is well-written, I can't help but to notice it's completely bizarre. I'm not sure if you are trying to convey some kind of message about fanstory in general, but if so. I think it's a negative one. That's okay. I've had some negative thoughts myself after reading some of the contest winning entries, composed by folks who cannot spell and often can't form a paragraph.
Have you had similar feelings?


 Comment Written 06-Nov-2019



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    No message here, Brenda. Just inane prattle. Thanks for giving this a look. Bill

reply by brenda faye curtis on 07-Nov-2019
    You're welcome, Bill.
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Told you, man -- LAY OFF THE COOKIES!! ;) :) LOL! I am officially laughing, Bill -- not chuckling, laughing!! You need to start your own cartoon Saturday night live-type YouTube channel.... yeah, I'd pay money to see it!! ;) :) thanx for sharing.... and I can't believe you have me laughing at vomit...eeeewwww!!


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    COOKIES!!!!!
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Being number one on Fanstory for scriptwriting is a great goal. Good visual imageries created. Good narration mixed with dialogue. Good storytelling. Nice work :)


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    Thank you, sunnilicious, for the kind and meaningful review. Bill
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I think even 1987 had more lines in his latest script than you have in this one. Do you plan to overtake him? Seems to me you've been writing just for the sake of writing lately. You've made your aim very clear in this, but I don't know about resorting to vomit. judi


 Comment Written 06-Nov-2019



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    This is actually just as long his last one. When it?s quantity that?s required, I can shovel it as well as anyone.

reply by judiverse on 06-Nov-2019
    If you followed 1987's practice, you wouldn't even have to promote! judi

reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
    You are shaming me, Judi, and it?s working. If I had the time to write four poems a day and review until my eyes bleed, I?d do that.

reply by judiverse on 06-Nov-2019
    If a strategy works, might as well keep at it. judi

reply by judiverse on 06-Nov-2019
    You're welcome. judi
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